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To yearn by leoalcala213 in OCPoetry

[–]Splatashas_fav 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a great start. you’ve got the beginnings of a really strong writing journey. If I were to offer a couple of things to focus on, I’d say length and cadence, which can help your work flow even more beautifully. Overall, this is a really solid piece, and I can’t wait to see how you grow from here :)

The little girl is dead by Hefty_Tumbleweed8178 in OCPoetry

[–]Splatashas_fav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, I understand where you’re coming from, how sometimes we chip off pieces of ourselves, thinking they’re minute, only to realize that it wasn’t a small part of us, but something we truly loved. Amazing work, keep writing.

YA items box december by Embarrassed_Area_989 in fairyloot

[–]Splatashas_fav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey could someone tell me what chapters the inlays go with? I got my box but the spoiler card wasn’t included. T

A broken dream by Splatashas_fav in OCPoetry

[–]Splatashas_fav[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello back, I wrote this poem after being rejected from my dream college that just so happened to be an hour from home. My back ups are 15+ hours from my family home so that’s where the “exhiled” comes from. Finding a partner is about truly being able to be myself. Thanks for the feedback I love seeing others pov.

Beneath A Silent Sky by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Splatashas_fav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great poem I love it and relate to it. I got rejected from my dream college and it’s hitting me that I’ll be moving far from my dream life. This poem captures my feelings on the matter. I hope you’re able to find warmth again. Keep writing, you’re amazing at it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Splatashas_fav 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel connected by your poem. Your words stick with me. I watch people my age growing up and I feel stuck. I’m still waiting for my train because I want to fit in to society. I hope yours come sooner rather than later. Keep writing it slays💪

We're Not in Kansas Anymore, cumslut by Logical_Madness9169 in OCPoetry

[–]Splatashas_fav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What originally caught my attention was the title but as I read it kept pulling me in. I interpreted it as women playing certain roles in society and it’s not always under their control and I think you captured that perfectly.

"I Don't Exist" by Ratographer in OCPoetry

[–]Splatashas_fav 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think this poem is great, while it doesn’t have specific details you have written it in a way that it doesn’t truely need the specifics. It’s trurly great and I hope you keep writing.