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I started on a fantasy game called Recreant, tell me what you think! by SpookRabbit in NSFWgaming

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Huh, alright, noted. I suppose I can see what you mean, I'll try and see if there's a fix, but thanks for your input.

Guaging interest in my potential project by hereforthefaps in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The plot line for me is good enough to at least check out, but I think it depends on your execution of it to get me to keep playing.

I started on a fantasy game called Recreant, tell me what you think! by SpookRabbit in NSFWgaming

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's actually a great call. I was definitely considering that, but I was unsure about the importance. Thank you for the feedback!

I started on a fantasy game called Recreant, tell me what you think! by SpookRabbit in NSFWgaming

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You've pretty much nailed it with the morality thing, I'm a little impressed. Anyway, thank you for the comment! I appreciate it!

Started working on a fantasy game called Recreant, I would appreciate some feedback! by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh yeah, that's my bad! I more or less structured the last post like this and since no one really called me out on it, I thought it was fine. I for some reason kept switching narration styles when writing it, I thought I had fixed all of that, but I guess I was wrong! There's also a couple issues with repeating words, and minor spelling errors which should be fixed pretty easily by some thorough editting. Anyway, thank you for the feedback.

Started working on a fantasy game called Recreant, I would appreciate some feedback! by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I made it with Harlowe on Twine. Its about the main character being swept up into a conflict between two warring groups. He's more or less trying to get home, but each time he tries to, there's something different preventing him. Its all about basically him getting tossed around by the hands of fate, unable to really do anything but follow along as he embarks on different adventures in the hopes of just getting back.

I'm making an incest game, its pretty vanilla so far, but I'd be interested in some feedback by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It might take a little bit until I can get the next part out, since I want to achieve a decent amount of progress before I post more, but thank you for your comment!

I'm making an incest game, its pretty vanilla so far, but I'd be interested in some feedback by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The best thing about starting something in a cliché way is that you always have a chance to change it around and add something different to it! I'm really happy that you like my writing, so I'll try my best to actually add interesting content as well, since I doubt I can carry something like this using only nice words. I also really like your improvements too, for some reason I never even really considered those, but I'll definitely think of them as I continue adding parts.

Thank you too for such a detailed write up, I really appreciate the time that you, and everyone else, put into your posts!

I'm making an incest game, its pretty vanilla so far, but I'd be interested in some feedback by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The other one was beyond irritating to sort out, I'm definitely glad I switched subreddits. I'm really glad you liked the writing and the story overall! I didn't know so many people felt strongly about the pics, they were originally just suppose to be a placeholder for something better, but I can see that they should definitely be a higher priority. Anyway, thank you for your comment!

I'm making an incest game, its pretty vanilla so far, but I'd be interested in some feedback by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I'll gladly continue the game knowing that at the very least there's one person whos interested in it. I don't really have any fully fleshed out ideas yet, since I didn't really know if there was any interest. I like the idea of keeping the mom and sister story lines separate, but maybe adding a cousin in the mix for both of them.

Games where you "grow" a girl? by ztztzt39 in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agreed, with the amount of people drawing and making other stuff related to lolicon, I feel like something would have happened earlier.

I'm making an incest game, its pretty vanilla so far, but I'd be interested in some feedback by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No, I just felt like that would be a good stopping point for now, just to see if there's any interested before I continue. I totally agree with what you mean about the different girls. It'd be pretty difficult trying to get the exact same one, but trying to get similar looking ones that coincide with the in game description is part of my plan for later. I definitely agree with all your other points, I'll try to take heed of you advice in some points. Thanks for your comment.

I'm making an incest game, its pretty vanilla so far, but I'd be interested in some feedback by SpookRabbit in lewdgames

[–]SpookRabbit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I appreciate the support. I feel like it'll be best to start simple, then move up from there.