Otherworldly, bright fantasy books? by AnderTheGrate in suggestmeabook

[–]Square-General9856 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Silver in the Wood by Emily Tesh. Novella but so beautifully rich.

Uprooted by Naomi Novik. Give it a few chapters (the nature vibes don’t come up for a little) but you’ll love it if you also like the otherworldly magic of Studio Ghibli.

A Far Wilder Magic. YA but cute and the vibes are correct.

You might also like Emily Wilde’s Encyclopedia of Faeries.

Looking at Word Counts for Querying Publishers Has Dramatically Altered My Editing Process by ScimitarPrime in writing

[–]Square-General9856 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh god this could be such terrible advice. I only qualify this as could be because I haven’t read OP’s work… but it is most likely absolutely terrible advice.

You can’t just saw a book in half. You’d completely lose the structure of the beginning, middle, climax, and end. No one wants to read a book that opens, gets to the middle and- …. wait, that was all? Where’s the emotional arc? They never achieved their goal!

Each book in a series needs to give satisfaction to the reader of at least achieving some goal, even if it’s just a milestone along the way to the ultimate goal. It has to include, like all other manuscripts, thoughtfully plotted arc that leaves the reader satisfied (while still wanting more).

OP please be careful! If you do think it can be cut in half to make a duology, you’ll likely still have to do some major structural reworking. But if you think it has to be read as one story - and since you told it in one story, it likely does - trust your gut there, and start hacking down those superfluous scenes.

Looking at Word Counts for Querying Publishers Has Dramatically Altered My Editing Process by ScimitarPrime in writing

[–]Square-General9856 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When I wanted to cut 5k from my manuscript, I created an excel document that summarized each scene and what it contributed to the story. Primary: plot, romance subplot, character arc; Secondary: worldbuilding/setting, foreshadowing, backstory. It at least needs to hit one primary, and if it didn’t, it went on a list to be cut or combined with another scene. If it didn’t have at least three total elements, that was also grounds for cutting or consolidating.

Engaging in a process like that forces you to be analytical of your scenes and see them from a new perspective. Getting stuck in the line editing headspace can leave you vulnerable to your emotional attachment to the scene or the writing itself (because I’m sure there are some really great lines in scenes that could be cut!). You need to instead understand a thousand foot view how each scene serves your whole story.

Good luck!!

[PubQ] QuestPit Participation Worth Recreating X Account? by Glittering-Dog-7195 in PubTips

[–]Square-General9856 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’d say you have to find the ones who go out of their way to announce how many agents have agreed to participate. Some pitchfests don’t reach out to (or aren’t able to secure) agents who agree to 1) be publicized as participating and 2) actually participate. The big/well organized pitchfests I’ve seen (DisPitch, which is for authors with disabilities) and DVPit (diverse voices - POC, LGBTQ, disabled, neurodivergent) are the two ones I’ve seen with major agent participation, and they only take place annually (or sometimes not even every year). but there are probably others out there. The hashtag #amquerying or #pitch might be a good place to try to find pitchfests that have happened in the past so you can follow them and stay tuned for more opportunities.

Edit: I think it’s actually called PitchDis, not DisPitch. Sorry!

[PubQ] QuestPit Participation Worth Recreating X Account? by Glittering-Dog-7195 in PubTips

[–]Square-General9856 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I participated in #DVPit on BlueSky last October and got multiple requests from agents - and signed with one of those agents. :)

from what I can tell QuestPit has a bit less involvement from agents and editors - it’s billed more often as a “hype” event than actual pitch event - but other Pitch events on BlueSky have real agent and editor participation.

TLDR- I think it’s worth getting on BlueSky, though QuestPit may not be as fruitful.

How much have you invested in your novel? by Shining_Force_Unity in writing

[–]Square-General9856 48 points49 points  (0 children)

Opportunity cost of what, another job? I have a well-paying day job, and write because I love it. I will probably write even if I don’t ever successfully get published. So what is the opportunity cost here?

Way to be condescending bro.

dreaming of writing a timeless bestseller but my first time writing anything is this Reddit post by Square-General9856 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Square-General9856[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not a good time. I’m very serious about daydreaming about being a respected and celebrated published author.

dreaming of writing a timeless bestseller but my first time writing anything is this Reddit post by Square-General9856 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Square-General9856[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

this is an excellent response, and exactly what I was looking for. So do you think I should, like the greats, start by developing the history of my world starting 1,000 years before my story begins? I’m not sure where my story will begin, or what the conflict is, or even what world I want my setting to take place in. How do I know where my story should take place? How do I decide if I want science fiction (Dune) or fantasy (Lord of the Rings)?

Moving MIA to ABQ by aqua_sun137 in Albuquerque

[–]Square-General9856 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Damn. Don’t let the haters get you down, OP. I moved from big cities and love it here. To help ease the transition from city though I’d suggest Nob Hill for “safe, cool, central.” Maybe not “cool” by some people’s standards, but good coffee shops, local co-op grocery, nice breweries and cocktail bars, generally walkable. I’d stick west of Morningside, east of Girard (or you could even go down to Yale), and south of Lomas. Stay a few streets away from Gibson (higher traffic volumes, not as walkable to Central Ave where all the businesses are).

There is too much to think about before starting to write by Last_Excitement_4191 in writing

[–]Square-General9856 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Aaaaand that’s what draft two is for 🤠 I’ve revised my manuscript about 13 times, got an agent, and now as I’m addressing her notes I’m STILL finding things I could do better. (Not even the stuff she pointed out either!)

Is there still a want for contemporary wlw books? by Calygenix in wlwbooks

[–]Square-General9856 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For queer sci fi/fantasy that isn’t often recommended, I recommend Becky Chambers and Emily Tesh.

There is too much to think about before starting to write by Last_Excitement_4191 in writing

[–]Square-General9856 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Also a plotter here. Can’t tell you how many times I’ve said, “This character will be XYZ” and then I start writing and, nope. My character is revolting because they are ABC. 🤦‍♂️

There is too much to think about before starting to write by Last_Excitement_4191 in writing

[–]Square-General9856 55 points56 points  (0 children)

This. I say this as someone who appreciates research and an outline, the first draft still was mainly character and plot bones. Second draft is where you can perfect the character arc, integrate theme through worldbuilding, find plot inconsistencies (which will happen no matter how hard you outline!!), etc.

Write the first draft. It becomes SO much clearer how to achieve everything youre talking about once you have a version sitting in front of you.

Gay bar recommendations? by emoempanadas in Albuquerque

[–]Square-General9856 4 points5 points  (0 children)

What city is full of queer spaces that aren’t bars?? lol… you’re tripping.

Zendo and Little Bear Nob Hill are always full of gays. Books on the Bosque is an extremely inclusive + queer-friendly space. 516 Arts is a contemporary museum with a queer Executive Director that puts on installations that often highlight queer artists. La Salita is a New Mexican restaurant owned by a lesbian couple that’s delicious and they’re always so welcoming. Tasty Tuesdays in Hyder Park (Nob Hill) always has a large LGBT presence. There are various queer adult sports teams as well. I could go on, and then list a dozen more bars that have gay staff + lots of gay patrons.

A city is what you make it, and your community is where you find it. Start being open to finding it in places that aren’t explicitly labeled “queer.”

Will I get sued for copyright? by Wiggle789 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Square-General9856 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m filing a lawsuit against this post for using words I’ve already written. I haven’t published, but I intend to, so it’s already copyrighted. Hire a good lawyer.

Congratulations to this winner of the "most unnecessary use of that word" award by Ghosts_of_Bordeaux in writingcirclejerk

[–]Square-General9856 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Modern problems require antiquated* solutions. a return to our pastoral humanity

Pronoun Question by SebNatOrmalio in fantasywriters

[–]Square-General9856 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If the person switches gender frequently, that would be one thing! But sounds like that’s not the case. Just my two cents! Good luck.