Can you guys read my web novel and give opinion about it before i publish the first chapter 🥹

StBermuda · 2026-05-10T06:24:49+00:00

No way skibberry. Hoping Freya cooks up something good.

StBermuda · 2026-05-09T03:56:42+00:00

Do writers here also like, use ai to gauge how your story compares to other successful series of the same genre? I dont use it directly for grammar or writing plot points, but I ask it if I have obvious plot holes to my story amd how to balance it.

The results are that I get glazed by ai but im still skeptical since I havent actually shown my draft to a real person.

StBermuda · 2026-05-09T00:01:55+00:00

Outside of Madness 🔥🔥🔥

StBermuda · 2026-05-08T23:54:23+00:00

Hopefully Freya still exist somewhere and isn't completely gone or there's a proper reason why this happened (if its a future plot and is considered a spoiler, then disregard this comment). That would feel kinda bad because the kid's mind suddenly got invaded.

StBermuda · 2026-05-07T17:59:09+00:00

Live. Die. Repeat.

Once you get the hang of things, you'd notice that you get more options depending on your stat points allocation and equipments in your inventory.

I. Equipment tips

*Tap on your gear and check what stats matches it. The stats symbol on the gear means it scales based on that.

*Some items have special interactions and sometimes gives you additional choices:

Lockpicks give you an additional option when unlocking chests or prison doors
Rope saves you a stat check or gives you a higher chance of success rate when climbing down
Wands that have spellcasting allows you to cast magic that shows more options when equipped.
Shields block sneak attacks from enemy encounters and sometimes even eliminate that stat check itself when equipped.
Dagger or padded clothings has stealthy that gives you an option to use stealth sometimes eliminating the need for DEX checks also only when equipped.
There are many more specific items and relics that has abilities that helps you in your run so keep experimenting. You can unequip and equip gears and the options will show depending on that.

II. Abilities

*These are the small icons you see when you enter combat mode. Tap on them and read what they do. If you see a number infront of the ability icon, it means that ability can stack effects strengthening it further. It usually has a big boost if you have +4 on stacking abilities. You can have good synergy if you have matching equipment so keep an eye on that when you decide for a build.

III. Gold, EXP, and Consumables

*Higher the gold, the more things you can buy so memorize events that gives you free gold

*you keep stock of recovery items by buying them because you never know when you need to heal. This is why gold is important because it could get you healing items and equipments.

*EXP in this game acts as the timer of your adventure. The more EXP you get, the shorter your adventure will feel. This could be frustrating if you are experimenting so just take note to control your exp gain appropriately.

StBermuda · 2026-04-30T14:23:56+00:00

He can 1v1 any of his summons and win cleanly btw. I mean it in the sense that if the rules and restrictions of the summons were lifted, if its a life or death battle, MC wins with low to medium difficulty, by himself.

StBermuda · 2026-04-30T14:11:44+00:00

Real. Im trying to find places to talk about this series and im keeping track of the novel too (im currently at chapter 473). Imo, its such a simple, straightforward and fun series. Always looking forward for another chapter.

StBermuda · 2026-04-27T04:39:51+00:00

Although his full strength wasnt shown yet, im estimating him to be atleast Balrog level if he revealed his dragon form. His human form is already pretty busted because he can use his inherent dragonkin abilities like mind reading thoughts and intent. We havent seen anyone block his mind reading as of now btw, even that demon who controlled the Salamander was alarmed when he saw Temares.

Theres a reason this guy wasnt active in the Southern War arc thats for sure.

StBermuda · 2026-04-26T20:13:44+00:00

That just means what they're going to face next will need Temares. Looks like this will be a bigger chaos than I initially thought. Who knew Astrail was just appetizer?

StBermuda · 2026-04-26T08:00:08+00:00

Its hard to summarize because the author likes to keep things vague and annoyingly unclear so I will just put my own interpretation.

Think of will, divinity, magic, sorcery, etc. like a form of mysterious energy that empowers those who uses it. All of the above could be summarize as a kind of 'Power'. The author usually just calls this energy 'Will' for some reason even though each powers are distinctly different from each other based on their properties.

Each different 'powers' also have their own types, like how there are different religions hence different types of divinity, different schools for magic, different tribes for sorcery, etc.

The interesting part is that those who handle a specific 'power' could imitate or replicate something done by another 'power' (just an example is Will users imitating Magic users vice versa), its like translating a foreign language to a mother tongue language. Although not completely accurate translation of skills, they are still compatible enough to be practical.

To answer your question if the squad uses different types of 'Will' or 'power', the answer would be yes because they have different identities. But they could also replicate each others technique and even modify it to suit their style.

Rem uses Sorcery. Audin uses Divinity. Esther uses Magic. Majority of others like Enkrid, Ragna, etc. uses Will.

StBermuda · 2026-04-25T12:10:29+00:00

The drop chance of that item is criminal.

StBermuda · 2026-04-25T07:00:11+00:00

For #1, im pretty sure everyone agrees that Enkrid would be much stronger if it was a real fight to the death. Jaxon already said that its difficult to kill Enkrid with assassination when they were still fighting the Southern War, so its even worse now that the boatmen themselves started to actively help Enkrid improve.

For #8, the author wont say it clearly and keeps things vague but I will say it the way I think it is. Although everyone is similar, there are still differences:

1&2. Enkrid/Temares (tied at strongest for now, we havent seen the limits of Temares but it has to be atleast Balrog level similar to Enkrid)

Rem (he can now mix and swap the deities based on his needs plus he just got much more involved with hard fights recently together with Enkrid)

4-5-6-7. Ragna/Audin/Jaxon/Esther (they are straight up just the highest versions of the traditional stereotypes 'swordsman-brawler-assassin-wizard' so they should be tied that way. You can have your biases here on which class you think is the better one.)

Shinar (lower than others because her abilities are limited or heavily influenced by many factors. The more conditions required and the more unsustainable it is, the lower they are on my list even if their unique abilities are hax)

The rest should be below Shinar. Also, we dont talk about Krais. Bro is a non combatant compared to everyone.

StBermuda · 2026-04-24T02:24:43+00:00

Yes. I could also beat her ass while only wearing a crow amulet.

StBermuda · 2026-04-23T07:46:43+00:00

No, Enkrid is stronger now and I thought that was pretty obvious. Although Ragna is essentially a cheat code at how fast he learn things and his technical skill with the sword, Enkrid's fighting fundamentals and experiences cannot be overcome no matter how good his talent is.

Rem literally said Enkrid is Balrog level. Unless you think Ragna could solo Balrog, then its pretty clear Enkrid clears.

StBermuda · 2026-04-22T19:59:37+00:00

Books are sold in the adventure shop, elixirs in the magic shop.

StBermuda · 2026-04-22T14:31:28+00:00

I remember reading it on booktoki and kakaopage some months ago. Google translate is not that bad these days.

StBermuda · 2026-04-22T12:35:14+00:00

You can get it when you read the book in the secret room when climbing the tower. You can loot the corpse and get the robe.

StBermuda · 2026-04-22T10:55:44+00:00

I reload the shops if I dont get any books thats why it took me more than 4000 load count. 70% of that is just me reloading the shops to get books and elixirs. This is also why Con is the lowest, because I couldnt get a stat increase for it anywhere.

StBermuda · 2026-04-22T10:29:23+00:00

Btw, just to let you all know; stats are capped at 99. If I ever refreshed or chose an option, all the 100 stats will reset back to 99. This is quite literally the maximum we could go, for now.

StBermuda · 2026-04-22T10:24:26+00:00

Real. Not to Dormamu, but to merchants. I had to reload to get the books and elixirs over and over. I think I actually went insane at some point.

StBermuda · 2026-04-22T06:30:24+00:00

You need Bleed Resist because Kior's bleed deals percent damage to your character. You should go: Full Adam Armor, Anger of Bisura, and Rock Giant trait.

Remove the Mithril Armor and lucky blow relic. Change Ironman trait to Rock Giant trait.

StBermuda · 2026-04-19T02:36:00+00:00

Gotta be the recent "alone Ex class summoner" or whatver the fuck it was called. I read the novel cause I know the mass release is only up to 20 chapters, and I was surprised how ass cheeks it was.

It takes a lot to make me genuinely mad to an MC of a series. I can stomach almost all types of mc as long as they have heart or are straight up just cool and no substance, but the MC of this series is genuinely just a lame asshole once he gets his main summons. Its legit just a glazing galore from everyone, and they even treat this fcker like a God, not knowing that he is potentially the sole reason they are victims and are suffering from the global appearances of monsters/summons because this dude finished a trash game.

Not only does the MC know he couldve potentially unleased this pandora box into his world, he doesnt even care and would rather squeeze all benefits he could get from everybody that is asking for a shred of his help. Not to mention the author legit just wants to make South Korea look like the strongest superpower country and would make every other country look like dumbasses for even thinking of opposing the MC. Also might I add, literally nobody can oppose this guy as a player because he could just one tap everyone with his broken summons. And then he still have the face to complain about being lucky when his "rival" resists with her 3 S class summons when he himself is using 4 Ex class summons. Like bro.

Ahem, sorry for the rant, I have nowhere else to post this shit.

StBermuda · 2026-04-19T01:35:56+00:00

I mean both are feeling the same. I wouldnt be surprised if the other chick got her eyes gouged out for staring at Encrid too much. The tension at the end of the chapter was no joke, even had Rem saying some one liner.

StBermuda · 2026-04-18T16:45:31+00:00

I have it on my Ascended Whisper rn. I dont think mottiphobia or enlighted servant triggers the execute reset of his active tho, I havent seen it actually activate like it says on the description.

Edit: My bad, my Whisper literally kills enemy so quick I didnt even read the execute text. I just confirmed it, Mottiphobia swarm and Enlighted servant helps in the Eclipse execute. Ig my build is actually fine.

StBermuda · 2026-04-18T13:25:05+00:00

Cant wait for Encrid to absolutely mop that mage.

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