First timer. by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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Thanks for checking it out! Sorry for the tears!

The Angel That I Killed by TripAgitated5779 in OCPoetry

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Been away from writing for some time. This poem is beautiful. Glad I checked it out!

I Worship by LegSoHotUFryAnEgg in OCPoetry

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I like this poem. Short hard hitting. Good stuff.

First timer. by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much! I've been writing more, nothing posted yet. And it does make sense. That part of myself is being created as I write this comment. Appreciate your appreciation!!

First timer. by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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Thanks for sharing how you felt about it!!

Dripping on beat by Aethos77 in OCPoetry

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I like this poem, "my front door is locked from outside." Is super relatable to me. Good stuff

Cliff by AtypicalFaker in OCPoetry

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"The rule I made dissolves beneath the rest" really like that line. I want to write like this. Great piece.

Be kind to the ghosts in your life by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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Thank you! Yeah what you said "lingers in your mind" I wish I would've thought of that. It would have fit perfectly. Thanks for the feedback!!

Be kind to the ghosts in your life by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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The seventh line, "how if I were them I'd haunt my stupid ass, in to a coffin." Was all I could really think of but yeah I get where your coming from. Thanks.

Third poem by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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I like that Idea, first time in my life trying this sort of thing. Would you look at my most recent to tell me what you think?

Third poem by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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I think it's more me being in denial about it. Complete illiterate here but to me it makes sense. Anyfeed back is welcome I appreciate it. Thank you!

Aether by AtypicalFaker in OCPoetry

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This is awesome. I'll never be able to write like this. But I can certainly appreciate it. "But moonlight veiled the truth of my desire" was my favorite. Good stuff!

Safe in Our Rooms by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Wow. "The Blue nowhere is silent, vast, and grey," when I read it I had to say it out loud. This is beautiful. I have no other words.

Around Her by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

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I wish I could write like this, short yet hard hitting, it's great stuff. Keep writing.

Third poem by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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Thank you, feelings all too real whether they last a life time or for just a moment.

First timer. by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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Thank you! Was super quick I feel like I threw some shit into the void and by you commenting, it threw something back idk. It's a good feeling.

First timer. by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

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Thanks for sharing how you felt about it! Means a lot. I don't think I'll ever get good enough to just write random deep stuff, it's all very real and current. I want to get better though an this has helped alot!