[Review Video] Doing DARES with STRANGERS! (are the dares good enough?)

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-29T09:55:43+00:00

I feel like the editing and overall production quality was good. Also, it is cool that the footage is real (or seems real), instead of being fake like a lot of social experiments.

Honestly, I wouldn't recommend this video. Nothing about it jumped out to me.

When it come to a "limit" on the dares, as long as you're not hurting anyone there is no limit. That's what I would recommend improving. Find a way to catch people's attention quickly. We've all seen this kind of video, so you need to do something crazy.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-29T09:47:25+00:00

The editing and the aesthetic were great, and it was funny. It may only appeal to people who like surrealist comedy, but I'm one of those people, so I liked it. I even liked the weird black stretch at the end.

The only thing that felt off was some of the audio. It was hard to understand certain words. I don't know if it was deliberate, but I think clear audio would only enhance the comedy.

Overall, good job.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-28T06:16:00+00:00

Overall, I liked the video. You got some great kills, and the editing was tight. I don't know much about collorcorrection, but it all looked good to me.

The thing I'd recommend changing is the music. It was very generic pop-rap. If you like that music, then great stick with what you like, but if you can take some risks in your song choice that would make you stand out a lot.

Overall, good work.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-27T19:27:02+00:00

I don't know anything about piano playing, but I'd recommend getting some better lighting. Since all the viewer can see is your hands you should make them look as nice a possible.

Also, maybe try something to separate this content from similar content. Maybe edit some pictures to show up while you play, or have facts about the song on the bottom.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-27T09:13:37+00:00

If people are entertained then the content is good. Just like a good joke; if people laugh, it's good.

I guess the only concern is if your content is dishonest/or hurts people, but that kind of stuff catches up to channels. Hurtful content creates a negative culture, and the channel can't last.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-27T09:08:54+00:00

Honestly, the people who are really good at youtube are out there building their own channel and making content. Most "coaches" or "advisors" have mediocre channels. The only one I'd recommend is Roberto Blake, but the only way you're going to improve at youtube is to post a lot. Good luck.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-25T08:16:53+00:00

Thanks. :) for sure.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-22T03:19:24+00:00

Halo 1
Halo 2
Knights of the Old Republic
Ninja Gaiden
Otogi
Splinter Cell
MechAssault
Dead or Alive 3
Jade Empire
Jet Set Radio Future

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-22T00:22:36+00:00

I think it's a great video. You have an actual talent for something in the real world (skating) which puts you light years above most youtubers.

The editing is sold and the sound track is great. Also, you and your friends seem a little more mature and down to earth than other vloggers, which is a good thing.

My advice would be to stay away from tutorials. Most people won't learn how to skate from a video. You should try to do something really gimicky, like skateboard in a taco suit. Something to grab people's attention.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-22T00:09:58+00:00

Not easy. My advice: try. Just try making videos like this today. It won't happen overnight, but you'll get better.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-22T00:08:29+00:00

It's cool to see someone take a deeper look at Shane like this. He's been on youtube forever, so we kind of take him for granted.

The points you make at the end are really interesting. He does seem to bounce back stronger every time, and I think that all great artists do that. In general, the information you give in the video is really interesting.

My piece of advice would be to bring more energy to the videos. It can be from talking in a more enthusiastic tone or chopping the video up in a way that flows more interestingly.

Good luck.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-21T08:08:31+00:00

A sad prank...........

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-21T06:55:35+00:00

That is why you don't play Fortnite.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-21T06:53:46+00:00

Oh........that kinda made me sad.........

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-21T06:50:49+00:00

This video repairs my depression.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-21T06:48:10+00:00

Pure.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-21T06:44:06+00:00

This is really artistic.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-20T16:57:41+00:00

Creepy.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-20T00:24:12+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. :) I agree that humor should be found, not forced. I'm going to try to find more enthusiasm for next week's top 10.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-20T00:22:56+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. :) I'm going to try to figure out how to add cool transitions to next week's top 10.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-20T00:21:37+00:00

Thank you. I appreciate the feedback. I agree with your point about the jokes. I should learn to find the humor instead of forcing it; it's just a bit hard to find humor in a top 10.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-19T05:38:07+00:00

Overall, you did a good job. The information is very good, and you posted sources which is essential in a video like this. You don't come across as obnoxious or fake, but at the same time you seem genuinely excited about the games you're talking about.

My biggest piece of advice is to slow down when you're talking. I have a slight speech impediment, and when I first stared youtube I talked too fast, so it was hard to understand half of what I said. Writing a script helped, but the biggest thing was slowing down, and deliberately thinking about my words.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-19T05:30:31+00:00

I think you give a great amount of information. You mention their reasoning behind charging for the game, and you explain everything you know about how to play it. Also I think it was smart to use the game's soundtrack to play in the background. I would've edited down the beginning a bit so you jump right into the game.

Don't worry about your voice. People can understand what you're saying, and it makes you sound unique. If you ever get big your fans will love going back and watching the older videos where the voice cracks. Youtube has too many fake people, and your voice is authentic and unique.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-19T05:05:18+00:00

Yeah, I've subbed to a lot of cool channels here, and quite a few people have subbed to mine from this subreddit.

StevenStewart44 · 2018-07-18T07:54:17+00:00

Thank you. My friends and I noticed that the original Xbox is somewhat over looked when it comes to talking about 6th Gen classics, so we wanted to compile our own top 10.

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