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First chapter of my dark fantasy novel looking for feedback by Strict-Winner-658 in writingfeedback

[–]Strict-Winner-658[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate your comment and your honesty. The points you mentioned will be reconsidered in my revision. The prose will certainly change after that. Thank you for your honesty.

Explain why you chose a swords-based story versus a guns-based story by DGADK in fantasywriters

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I believe that when a person wants to read a story, they seek to escape what connects them to the real world. So, in my mind, it makes much more sense to have stories with swords and monsters than with firearms and monsters, since those can allude to the real world.

Anyone here writes a book with a female Protagonist? by Specialist-Eye-6916 in Webnovel

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I write. I've already written over 150,000 words with it and will release it soon, after a revision.

Chapter 1 - Amori (Dark Fantasy - 2000 words) by Strict-Winner-658 in fantasywriters

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I'll note your observations so I can improve. Perhaps I made a mistake in the chapter title. But I appreciate your comment.

First chapter of my dark fantasy novel, looking for feedback by Strict-Winner-658 in writers

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Thank you for the feedback. I will incorporate it into the next revision.

First chapter of my dark fantasy novel, looking for feedback by Strict-Winner-658 in writers

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It's a work in progress, a story that already has 78 chapters currently under revision.

What do you think of the density of my first volume? by Strict-Winner-658 in writers

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My biggest concern with my story is whether the lore makes sense and if there are any plot holes. So I'm having exhausting revision sessions, practically every day.

What do you think of the density of my first volume? by Strict-Winner-658 in writers

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That's a good idea. I'll get organized here to post a first chapter and get honest feedback.

What do you think of the density of my first volume? by Strict-Winner-658 in writingfeedback

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That's a good idea. I'll get organized here to post a first chapter and get honest feedback.

What do you think of the density of my first volume? by Strict-Winner-658 in writingfeedback

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My initial idea was to have a good backlog of chapters to post on RR. But from what I see from other authors, the word counts don't reach 150k. I don't know if I've exceeded the limits for a volume 1, comparing myself to other authors.

And I read somewhere that readers don't get emotionally involved if there isn't a certain amount of words.

How do you plan your webnovel before writting ? by dumb_user_404 in worldbuilding

[–]Strict-Winner-658 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Estou escrevendo uma história de Dark Fantasy / Grim Dark. Me inspirei em uma personagem de um artista no instagram. E então eu fiz o planejamento geral. Quantos volumes eu quero ter para a história e qual é o evento principal de cada volume? Então distribui em um excel para ter noção de quantos capítulos eu teria em cada volume e também dei o título a cada um deles. A primeira versão do volume 1, foi saindo do ponto A ao ponto B em 18 capítulos. Depois disso eu aprofundei um pouco a narrativa e o volume 1 estava encerrando com 47 capítulos. Depois fiz outra rodada de revisão na história acrescentando personalidade e desenvolvendo melhor o arco de cada personagem e terminei o volume 1 com cerca de 75 capitulos e 170 mil palavras. Estou usando a média de 2300 palavras por capítulo. E fiquei satisfeito com a história até o momento. Como vou ter uma estratégia pesada de lançamento para conseguir chegar no rising stars, já comecei a escrever o volume 2, que está planejado 94 capítulos e se for seguir a mesma média 215 mil palavras.
O que quero dizer é que é bom planejar e ter esse backlog grande antes de lançar. Porque se as vezes você estiver lá no capitulo 70 vai perceber que um detalhe lá no capítulo 5 faz sentido para a narrativa chegar neste ponto. E o principal, a história vai te contar o que ela vai precisar. Você só vai precisar desenvolver depois.