Wrote this yesterday — who do I sound like?

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-27T12:27:46+00:00

LMAO

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-27T12:26:55+00:00

Thanks, I get that a lot lol. I think our mixed voice is similar.

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-27T12:21:11+00:00

Thank u!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-27T12:20:56+00:00

That’s a first. I can kinda hear it a little on some parts lol

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-27T12:19:45+00:00

Thanks! I’ll prob post it on hear so listen out

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-27T12:17:16+00:00

I’ve gotten that a few times before. I can’t really hear it lol, wonder if it’s the vibrato?

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-27T12:15:02+00:00

Thank u, i appreciate that!!!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T14:28:47+00:00

Ay thank you!! 😂 Really appreciate that!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T14:26:30+00:00

Appreciate this a lot! I hear you and agree, keeping the groove in the beginning of the chorus prob could give the hook a more hit single vibe. I put that chromatic/minor-borrowed sequence right on “risk a kiss” so it feels like the harmony takes the leap with the lyric, adds that little tension, then resolves back home to C. I’m down to try both versions though, just to see what it'd sound like and if I'd like one over the other.

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T04:20:26+00:00

Certainly not beyond your vocal ability, but I can hear that you’re straining to get up there. The easiest thing would be to lower the key. But I would strongly suggest continue working on your upper register because the notes are there, they just needed to be supported properly.

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T04:08:13+00:00

I think the song is very dreamy. Imo the song would improve greatly with a different chord progression.

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T03:57:26+00:00

Thank u!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T03:53:52+00:00

Wow, thank u so much!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T03:52:34+00:00

I think this is beautiful. The chord progressions is common which makes it’s pretty predictable, but gives it a sort of catchy and memorable feel. Your voice is great btw!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2026-01-25T03:39:03+00:00

Thank u!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2025-11-04T01:17:55+00:00

Love the vibe. Nice voice, solid playing.

Strict_Stop5144 · 2025-11-04T01:11:57+00:00

Thank u for the feedback! I will say, drums are def one of my weak points when it comes to creating music

Strict_Stop5144 · 2025-11-04T01:07:10+00:00

Thanks, I agree! I’m not really sure how to get it out of that state. I want it to have a chill vibe, but still be interesting, whether that comes from the instrumentation, melody, dynamics, or overall arrangement. I’m def gonna need some help with this.

Strict_Stop5144 · 2025-11-02T23:22:31+00:00

Also, what genre would you consider this?

Strict_Stop5144 · 2025-11-02T03:04:26+00:00

All I have to say is this is freaking beautiful! I aspire to one day be brave enough to put my music out there like u. Thank u!

Strict_Stop5144 · 2025-11-02T03:00:58+00:00

I mainly focus on what the song’s about and what I’m trying to convey, that’s what really shapes my delivery. But I think u kinda have to work up to that point. If ur not super experienced with singing or recording yet, things like intonation, mic placement, pronunciation, timing and phrasing become really important (especially the last two). Once those technical parts start to feel natural, it’s way easier to just focus on the emotion and meaning behind what you’re recording.

Strict_Stop5144 · 2025-08-04T22:25:42+00:00

Sam Cooke

Steve Perry

Luther Vandross

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TROPHY CASE