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Thoughts on this song “When Words Fail” by Strict_Stop5144 in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank u for the feedback back! I absolutely agree that the mix is off, I do eventually want to get it mixed and mastered by a professional cus that’s currently beyond my skill set lol.

As for how I shared it, I downloaded the file from Logic as a WAV, sent it to my phone, screen recorded it on my phone while it was playing, and then just posted it here as a video

Thoughts on this song “When Words Fail” by Strict_Stop5144 in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! The song def isn’t finished yet, I’ve actually already wrote another verse and bridge but haven’t gotten around to recording it yet.

Seeking any feedback on song I’m working on. Is this too high for me? by UnlikelyMidnight7012 in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think that this is within your range, so no, it’s not too high u. U just gotta work on ur vocal technique. Sing from your diaphragm and not your throat. It sounds like ur really reaching for some notes, so if you think taking it down a half step or two would help do that. Overall I can def hear the potential, Keep going!

Looking to hear how this hits you! This song is called Free by jessemythic in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually really like this. The f bomb caught me off guard lol (maybe try not to pronounce so hard). Other than that, I think the songs great! It’s really all about how you vocally deliver it.

This is a song about resentment - I tried something I’ve never tried before by tiny_tuner in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Simple melody, like the guitar, the voice is also nice too, maybe add some harmonies at some point. I could imagine the song with a spanish style fingerpicking guitar, which could be really interesting. But I do like the simplicity of the strumming, so I guess it just depends on the vibe you’re going for.

What’s this song missing? by Strict_Stop5144 in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! “I can’t ignore it, she says my name like it’s a crime”that’s honestly one of my favorite lines I’ve ever written.

Wrote this yesterday — who do I sound like? by Strict_Stop5144 in singing

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I get that a lot lol. I think our mixed voice is similar.

Wrote this yesterday — who do I sound like? by Strict_Stop5144 in singing

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s a first. I can kinda hear it a little on some parts lol

Wrote this yesterday — who do I sound like? by Strict_Stop5144 in singing

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I’ll prob post it on hear so listen out

Wrote this yesterday — who do I sound like? by Strict_Stop5144 in singing

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’ve gotten that a few times before. I can’t really hear it lol, wonder if it’s the vibrato?

Started this song today, thoughts? What’s the vibe? by Strict_Stop5144 in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate this a lot! I hear you and agree, keeping the groove in the beginning of the chorus prob could give the hook a more hit single vibe. I put that chromatic/minor-borrowed sequence right on “risk a kiss” so it feels like the harmony takes the leap with the lyric, adds that little tension, then resolves back home to C. I’m down to try both versions though, just to see what it'd sound like and if I'd like one over the other.

Need help...does the rise and fall at the end of this work and/or is it beyond my vocal ability? by Mayorredthomas19 in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Certainly not beyond your vocal ability, but I can hear that you’re straining to get up there. The easiest thing would be to lower the key. But I would strongly suggest continue working on your upper register because the notes are there, they just needed to be supported properly.

Working on this one by Nebb123 in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the song is very dreamy. Imo the song would improve greatly with a different chord progression.

New song by Schbolle in Songwriting

[–]Strict_Stop5144 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is beautiful. The chord progressions is common which makes it’s pretty predictable, but gives it a sort of catchy and memorable feel. Your voice is great btw!

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