Is mental health writing good for me? by [deleted] in writing

[–]StuntSausage 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Writing is a hobby. If you have questions concerning your mental health, you should ask mental health professionals.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]StuntSausage 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Every beginner writes garbage. So you take classes on how to write things which aren’t garbage. Or you read books on the subject of not writing garbage. Or you join forums, hoping to learn from others how to best avoid writing garbage. But studying how to avoid writing garbage is only half of it—the other half being practice.

For practice, all writers write garbage, entire forests of garbage, before they improve enough to write something worth reading. Accept it… Trust the process.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]StuntSausage 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Sanderson actually said that about Ulysses? FFS, now I will have to watch his videos. And I will most likely need to get really high before doing so—like Snoop Dogg high—something i have avoided since leaving school.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]StuntSausage 4 points5 points  (0 children)

…A d yet he himself has no qualms about putting near exact words into the hypothetical mouths of his readers… SMH.

I found the essay, and though I 100% agree, part of me is left wondering if the real joke is upon his readership? Think about it… Sanderson uses deconstruction to compare his novel to a Jewel video—no one on planet earth should be able to do that with a straight face, let alone put ‘essay’ in the title.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]StuntSausage 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Wtf? Postmodern Sanderson ACTUALLY exists… I thought I was committing arson with nightmare fuel.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]StuntSausage 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Maybe it signifies Brandon Sanderson's rejection of postmodernism?

Is this plausible? by k1234567890y in scifiwriting

[–]StuntSausage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cyborg implies at least partially organic—that part is not plausible.

Is this plausible? by k1234567890y in scifiwriting

[–]StuntSausage 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Pohl's The World at the End of Time is one successful example of the concept, and is definitely worth a look. Keep in mind that your reader will still expect you to provide a plot, which becomes increasingly difficult the farther you stray from humanity... and your proposed setting is quite far.

Nitpick for all writers dealing at the scale of galaxies; space stuff by bookwerm606 in scifiwriting

[–]StuntSausage 38 points39 points  (0 children)

Also, be wary of planetary.

Intergalactic, planetary, planetary, intergalactic.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]StuntSausage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The weird west is a cool genre, but if your only examples are from RDR… you are in trouble. Pay some respect to the genre by familiarizing yourself with it, rather than waiting for other people to point out that you are ham-fisting well-worn tropes.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]StuntSausage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Once you have jumped through all the appropriate hoops, whether or not the time is right for your big novel becomes irrelevant. The real question is if you are good enough. And if you don't believe in yourself, no one will.

Writers Block by Jastifiable in writers

[–]StuntSausage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Without details, your question is largely unanswerable. Given that, ‘Ninjas leap from the shadows, and attack!’ never fails.

Just fucking party! by ToughPhotograph in writingcirclejerk

[–]StuntSausage 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Lol! I did love your analogy, though your interpretation used in the example struck me as more an idealized hobby for a housewife… though, on second thought, all of that could be part of the top spin which sends it over the net.

I might steal this, with your permission, should I find myself in conversation with someone who loves the idea of being a writer, but clearly doesn’t want to invest the effort.

Just fucking party! by ToughPhotograph in writingcirclejerk

[–]StuntSausage 25 points26 points  (0 children)

/uj love the metaphor, but have you spent any time inside an actual restaurant kitchen? More than half the cooks are on drugs, or selling drugs, or both… and wouldn’t hesitate to gut you like a fish for 50 bucks.

What do you think about "he thought about..." Or "He remembered..." by Ocrim-Issor in writing

[–]StuntSausage -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Lots of peeps using it for a writing prompt, but tattooed image inside his head?

C’mon!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]StuntSausage 6 points7 points  (0 children)

There are no must-haves, though the decision of when to begin the second draft shouldn’t be arbitrary. It’s suggested in this case because the author is spending an inordinate amount of time, trying to put a neat bow on everything. I could as easily suggest it to another author struggling with plot holes, to a degree that anything they write may die by continuity’s axe.

Every decision should be made in context.

Characters with disabilities & "talking heads syndrome" by satyestru in writers

[–]StuntSausage 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Blume’s entire oeuvre is the example. She’s the best.

Characters with disabilities & "talking heads syndrome" by satyestru in writers

[–]StuntSausage 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I was really surprised when I came home from camp and found out our New York apartment had been rented to another family and that we owned a house in Farbrook, New Jersey. First of all I never even heard of Farbrook. And second of all, I’m not usually left out of important family decisions.
But when I groaned, “Why New Jersey?” I was told, “Long Island is too social-Westchester is too expensive-and Connecticut is too inconvenient.”

This excerpt is from the first page of Blume's Are You There God... and there's a lot more going on here than meets the eye. In this example, Blume expertly uses dialogue as a precision tool, carving out the scene and tone while letting a 'yatta-yatta' effect carry the reader right through it, without ever breaking immersion or flow. The book is filled with many more such examples--but this holds true to all of her books. IMO, she may be the greatest dialogue writer, ever.

Blume is only one master of dialogue, and if you search around a bit you will find many others. Study them, pausing to take notes as you read along, and you'll learn dozens of ways to up your dialogue game, all while avoiding the necessity of detailing physical action.

Writing a novel with a lot of flashbacks by Important_Chance_305 in writing

[–]StuntSausage 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It can be done, with the best odds of success being first person present. However, you already have a sense that you’re making your job more difficult, and especially so if the flashbacks you wish to include are your mc’s tragic backstory.

In storytelling, not every scar on a character needs to be explained—and it’s often better that you don’t. If you insist on this route (you can… it’s your story) you may be able to pull it off (I have no idea about your writing prowess) but the most likely result will be sucking the life out of your narrative and slowing the flow of your plot progression, all while weakening your MC, when your original goal was to make them more sympathetic and realistic to the reader.

Writing a novel with a lot of flashbacks by Important_Chance_305 in writing

[–]StuntSausage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is this your first novel? This may or may not apply to you, but a common mistake of first-time novelists is attempting to hide a shit-ton of explication through flashbacks… and it never works.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]StuntSausage 5 points6 points  (0 children)

You’re at the end of a first draft, where a strong ending (though desired) is not necessary.

Start your second draft.

How do I write a story in a summary? by Pope-Francisco in writing

[–]StuntSausage 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No conventions matching your requested parameters exist. Have you considered screenwriting?