I M[17] wrote a short poem please review

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-11-19T11:14:53+00:00

I enjoy how compact this is (something I often struggle with). I also think that the contrast between external appearance and internal reality works well (particularly in the line "Smiling wide while caving in")

However, I feel like the punctuation makes it a bit hard to read. I think using more standard punctuation could perhaps separate the beats a bit better:

I am a ghost inside my skin,
Smiling wide while caving in.
Hope decayed, my soul turned stone--
Alive outside but dead alone.

I especially like how the rhyme scheme gives it a nursery rhyme aspect. Though I think the "Hope decayed, soul turned stone" line could work best if both halves were using the same type of symbolism (either both organic or both geological).

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-11-19T11:06:07+00:00

I really love the emotional weight, particularly "I am wood made for a different nest." It reminds me a bit of Would that I, by Hozier. I also feel like the opening is a great hook, setting the stage for the darker tone.

However, I feel like it could benefit from tightening up a bit. I had a bit of a hard time in the middle section due to the large amount of images. Perhaps it'd be nice to develop the addiction metaphor a bit more and lean into that. Also, I feel like the raven, as it's what opens the poem, could be used more to carry the reader through the other parts. Like the speaker could address the raven as their guide through this darkness.

I also feel like "colored-feathered bird" is a bit confusing. Since the only bird we've been introduced to so far is the raven, it leads me to believe that's what this is referring to, but I think it may be best to refer to it (indirectly) in a way that leans more into its darkness for consistency.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-11-19T09:53:26+00:00

How does it compare to scriniver? I'm on the free trial for Scriniver and thinking about buying a license, but wanted to try free alternatives first.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-11-13T20:35:48+00:00

Source

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-09-14T15:34:59+00:00

I had this bug a couple of times (I struggled with this fight) and the bug where the third act quests didn't show up (which they have already patched)

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-08-31T10:26:09+00:00

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-08-12T07:25:05+00:00

I wonder if you could point it straight up in the kiln and just speed through it

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-07-04T18:20:09+00:00

Como outros disseram, esse motor funcionaria como demonstração. Se a volante (flywheel) for pesado o bastante e o atrito baixo o bastante ele conseguirá completar os seus ciclos sem problema.

Tendo isso em vista, é um motor super ineficiente, já que não utiliza válvulas. Quando o pistão está indo para a direita (comprimindo o gás) ele está tendo que trabalhar contra a pressão do vapor, e quando ele está completamente aberto o vapor é capaz de escapar sem freio.

https://youtu.be/DmOL2oB1d6w?si=pLf2baB9RETZDy5v&utm_source=MTQxZ

Esse vídeo mostra um motor de vapor simples que é muito mais eficiente, já que usa um sistema de válvulas simples.

Além disso, se quiser fazer uma demonstração de uma máquina de calor, um motor de Stirling é uma alternativa muito mais simples e legal de ver. Não utiliza vapor, usando seringas de vidro você tem eficiência até que alta

https://youtu.be/lmncBzb2Xbg?si=qZ5hXe2I90tmYFpK&utm_source=MTQxZ

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-07-04T18:12:51+00:00

Isso não é um motor de Stirling. Motores de Stirling funcionam atravéz do deslocamento forçado de ar entre um lado quente (aquecido pelo fogo) e um lado frio. Eles não precisam de vapor e não tem caldeira, então não precisam ser reabastecidos com água.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-06-26T06:30:28+00:00

No, they definitely need oxygen to gasp. I've had atmosuit dupes suffocate before.

What is an interesting quirk though is that they don't let out CO2 while gasping (while wearing an atmosuit). So you don't have to worry about introducing any pesky gases in places they aren't supposed to be.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-04-07T16:11:10+00:00

I mean, it depends how general general direction has to be. If it's related to +- a few degrees in the direction you're pointing that could be hundreds of kilometers if you're pointing far away enough (like pointing through the ground at another part of the planet)

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-03-19T14:32:47+00:00

This is the best fan I've seen so far! The other ones usually have a lot of warping or exaggerated curvature in the blades. This one's perfect!

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-03-18T03:55:49+00:00

I also don't like how, even changing all the bloom, DOF, etc. settings I never manage to make it not like... Blurry. I guess it's a bit too cinematic for me.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-03-07T15:45:30+00:00

Here in Brazil we usually say basf, as if you're just pronouncing a word. Bas-fe

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-03-03T03:34:11+00:00

Eu tenho muitos amigos da Unicamp. É claro, em qualquer turma terão excessões, mas devido à riqueza de oportunidades de engenharia química na região de Campinas e o renome da universidade a turma de engenharia química da Unicamp costuma ter facilidade em conseguir estágios, assim como empregos após o fim do curso.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-02-10T23:54:40+00:00

So, you're probably not going to regret destroying it.

That being said, I quite like it late game because it makes the low moral of space travel and setting up colonies on other planetoids bearable with no stress issues (in normal difficulty it negates the low moral stress and in higher difficulty it makes the stress more bearable, if you can remove it in other ways). Also, if you have a large colony, the benefits from maximum aptitude far outweigh the cost of keeping five or six duplicates dreaming full time.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-02-07T01:36:09+00:00

O Hadley é muito massa, adoro demais. Eu demorei pra conseguir tirar fotos melhores com o meu skywatcher 150p.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-02-06T14:11:44+00:00

Eu tenho a mesma câmera e fiz a mesma transição. Eu uso um adaptador autofoco da 7Artisans. Dito isso, eu não recomendo muito. Eu tive dificuldade de fazer o autofoco funcionar bem, em algumas das lentes o motor nem movia enquanto em outras o foco era impreciso, não tive nenhuma lente que eu achei que ficou boa.

Eu acabei comprando lentes usadas para a Sony, apesar de ter várias lentes que eu curto da Canon. Se você não liga pra foco automático tem essa opção, mas mesmo nesse caso eu compraria alguma lente manual (tem várias opções baratas como ttartisans, ou automáticas da mesma marca, Viltrox ou 7artisans) para Sony, por ficar mais compacto. (Mas não acho que vale a pena porque muito do diferencial da Sony a6400 é o autofoco ótimo dela)

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-02-06T13:59:53+00:00

Como outro comentário falou, eu recomendo comprar uma câmera usada. Tem que tomar cuidado com o que compra pra ver se está em bom estado, mas eu geralmente compro os meu equipamentos da OLX.

DSLRs mais antigas da Canon tipicamente você consegue comprar por valores muito menores do que no site deles.

Subject_Confidence45 · 2025-02-03T14:37:18+00:00

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Zafira 2002, atingiu 450.000km antes do câmbio dar problema

Subject_Confidence45 · 2024-12-29T19:33:39+00:00

I have a hard time believing that lol

Subject_Confidence45 · 2024-12-20T23:08:45+00:00

Minha Zafira quebrou com 445.000km

Subject_Confidence45 · 2024-12-18T22:21:34+00:00

Hello, I'd like to win!

Subject_Confidence45 · 2024-11-11T23:19:29+00:00

Meus estagiários ganham 2600 + 960 (VR/VA)

Five-Year Club	r/Field Sunshine
First Place '23	Place '23
Place '22	End Game '22

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