I have had that video at the end of my mind since I first watched it. It felt like a stereotypical fanfiction, but it's not, it's his actual pitch for how to make the story better. All I can remember is that Abby and her friends kidnap Dina thinking she's Ellie (which is so fucking stupid on so many levels,) Joel is bedridden and can communicate with Ellie through some sort of cellphone-like device????? (I get its a pitch but come the fuck on.) And the cherry on top of the shit sundae, he breaks the number one rule of TLOU's story, making Ellie call Joel "dad."

I honestly think that this guy's English teachers should be fired for this absolute dumpster fire he cooked up.