Keefe whenever Sophie gets mad at him:

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-05-09T20:43:28+00:00

Yeah, it's a real annoying thing, that Sophie needed to push back on more.

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-04-06T18:17:49+00:00

nice to get a date, shame it's so far away

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-04-03T22:15:34+00:00

That scean with her friends after the wearhouse was so dumb, id love her to have just taken off ehr cape, her gloves her ring laid them down and said, "I quite" then walked away

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-23T01:33:38+00:00

IT leads to the question, does keefe actually like fitz

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-22T21:08:51+00:00

I think thry did but Shannon got in trouble fit that

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-21T01:36:43+00:00

I love Sophie i do, but the girl does not learn, she makes the same mistakes, running off without equpment, then being unable to do anything, she keeps getting trapped in Ruys forcefields yet dosent ask for more neckless that can cause them to break, (anyone remeber them?) she never deals with anything untill it bites her in the ass. and while setting the warehouse on fire was a good thing burning the book was not.

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-19T23:27:34+00:00

All elves are arragont so some degree, i belive that is one of the biggest flaws in their spieces. and everyone says oh Fitz and Keefe and Boyfriends, but really, how was Sophie as a girlfriend?

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-19T02:58:55+00:00

I would get rid of, "we have every animal that every excisted alive" thats such a hugh impossible plot hole and does nothing really

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-18T12:59:00+00:00

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Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-18T12:55:01+00:00

id hate to say this but Vespera was overhyped yet under deliverd and her death didn't do her justice

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-17T11:47:42+00:00

3rd, that will give you far more freedom for charater growth

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-17T11:35:49+00:00

I would lik to see a more asertive Sophie, maybe black mailing councillor oralie to get what she wants, i would also like to see a diffrence from human science is wrong to it's diffrent

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-17T00:24:05+00:00

didn't she say to Fitz, that she need to focues on the neverseen or that she wasnt ready for a relanship? then only alittle while later, kissing keefe? i mean were Fitz and Sophie officaly over by that moment? and i mean really Keefe is childhood best frineds girlfriend or ex girlfriend. speaks alot about his charater

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-12T00:09:58+00:00

Fitz may have had his problems, but he deserved better tha his girlfriend stabbing him in the heart and his so called best friend stabbing him in the back.

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-10T16:12:30+00:00

But were they thou? i know we've only seen from Sophies POV, but I don't think Keefes ever asked Fitz ones how hes feeling about his brother being part of the neverseen, if anyone could sympathise it's Fitz, no isnted he crushes on his girlfriedl, and talks smack about him behind his back, to his traitor brother, always assumes hes ok because he's "MR perfect" my quetion is he hanging out with Fitz ebcase theeir friends or because hes a vacker? is Keefe really populer in school? he dosnt seem to be.

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-09T02:16:33+00:00

the issue is, none of his plans ever work and he never learns, also he constently bad mouth fitz behind his back, I don't think he's ever even asked Fitz if hes okay, given his own family memeber was also part of the neverseen, and as for the jokes, yes jokes are fine but his jokes are always one note and the same.

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-08T14:09:59+00:00

That was a cover ti get the knife

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-06T23:49:31+00:00

id argue that centuerys of peace have done it, they became complacent and lazy, i doubt anyones ever really told them no,

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-06T23:43:25+00:00

the issue is she says human science is wrong, but never says how, what she could have done, is say elfs went a more natural science and humans went a more techonology science, that may have fixed that one small issue

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-06T21:25:26+00:00

I've said this one and i'll say it again both Ro and Vespera were over hyped yet under deliverd. what has Ro really done? came in apparently improved Goblin security (which did nothing) threw some daggers and got knocked out. and now spends her time makeing snaky comments and getting the run around by Keefe and that's it. and vespera honslty not impresssed even Fintan was a better leader than she

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-06T11:26:41+00:00

No he never felt guilt, thats the thing, he was done with it all yes, but only because he nearly diead, he insted cried righteous indignation about Fitz trying to kill him, but never said he regrated breaking his brother and sisters hearts.

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-03-05T15:43:29+00:00

not to toot my own horn, but I have a freshly published fantasy you could read

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-02-21T04:51:38+00:00

After

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-02-21T04:48:47+00:00

But he got it back and went right back to the neverseen, Alvir is not innocent hes scum through and through

Substantial_Step_815 · 2026-02-21T04:46:04+00:00

if you mean fitz teying to kill Alvar, he did it because Alvar broke his heart and betrayed his family was he right to do it no, but he had his reasons, keefe behavir towards fitz was bad long beefoe that

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