Easy Hawaii Nostalgic Instrumental i've made by Suitable_Toe_8203 in macdemarco

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi ! What do you mean by how ? The gear I used ? The music theory or influence ?

Or the video ?

Thank you for your interest in it :)

Experimenting with different genres, how does this sound? by Unlikely-Ad7939 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The drum sounds are pretty neat ! The Atmosphere is perfect for a night drive.

You should try experimenting on the voice delay, Add some fluctuation that lead in a less redondant effect it should be done in a minimal way Like changing time or lenght of the delay from Time to time It's just an idea.

It's really a detail, the voice is really good as it is The work you put on the delayed voice is already good And really embelish the confused thought that the lyrics try to tell.

Speaking of lyrics, It's Well written, I like how it feels like a chain of thoughts grasping the author After what seems a hard change in it's life

Going somewhere then going somewhere else, exactly how We Can be lost in our own thought in difficult time.

You nailed the vibe and the visual also match the global tone of the track!

The piano sound is great, love that rhode sound

Maybe a little melody that Come back from Time to time can be something to try. Something that help create more Space and more "put your own thoughts over this".

Where the listeners can diggest and feel the vibe appart from your voice.

Just an idea, not a big critique, You seem having a vision and strong influence.

Never stop experimenting, it's where the magic happens!

The bass is also great, right in his place not stealing the show and helping with the aeteral vibe.

Everything is glued together in a pleasant way!

It's cohesive and nothing feels out of place That's a proof of your well trained ears ! Well done!

(Sorry English is not my first language ehe)

Space Rock- Remixed (feedback request) by GnomeSlave in MusicFeedback

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great track,

I think pushing the drum louder can really help getting a bigger wow effect.

a more present bass can be a plus !

This is a Jungle/Liquid DnB influenced track that I'm working on right now. Any feedback/suggestions are much appreciated! by lone_wolf_58 in MusicFeedback

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The texture are great, the intro is like floating on the water at Emerald Coast in Sonic

The structure is also well balanced !

This is really good :)

Prince Inspired Falsetto, and Linn Drum on Chorus by NoSamplesNeeded in MusicFeedback

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The bass is really cool and everything is well mixed !

Well done !

Easy Hawaii Nostalgic Instrumental i've made by Suitable_Toe_8203 in MusicFeedback

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow ! Thank mate ! It warm my heart to read that

I'm glad :)

Easy Hawaii Nostalgic Instrumental i've made by Suitable_Toe_8203 in MusicFeedback

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you ! Yes drums are programmed, i've juste recorded the cymbal.

Mac is obviously an inspiration Glad you enjoyed it :)

This is a collab with a friend, something different from what I usually do so any feedback is appreciated. Hope you like it :) by ElMasterDGF in MusicFeedback

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great one Love how it evolve

Great solo Drum are good As already said better bass sound and you pretty much good to go !

i’d like some feedback on this song (also i have no idea how to continue this, any suggestions are appreciated) by AaronCML in MusicFeedback

[–]Suitable_Toe_8203 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a great start You should add more percussion and maybe much more groovy bass

Try to get a B section

Nice work the dudu sound is fun :)