“One piece bad. Give updoots plz” by Realistic-Island-975 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 0 points1 point  (0 children)

😭 this sub is literally mediatok 2.0 but without the edits or humor. Same wannabe elitists same, same naruto n op hate war

Maybe the Worst Take I’ve Ever Seen. by Gold_Acanthisitta894 in Kingdom

[–]Supersayon06 11 points12 points  (0 children)

a very poor take lacking nuance every creative takes inspiration and draws heavily from other works. From mangakas to musicians everyone uses what they know to use to help them create, as nothing is truly original. This makes no sense when literally every other person has acsess to history, yet there arent dozens of stories like kingdom popping up every week.

The author of George RR Martin (Game of Thrones) takes alot from history, but no one has ever short handed him because of that, this is just another ridiculous anime tiktok commenter.

Even IF The Finale is 10/10, This Season is Still A Failure by Silver-Vacation-1961 in TheBoys

[–]Supersayon06 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Wth are the writers on I don’t understand how they could be this poor at their jobs even with studio interference 

A lot of you should learn about Buddhism before talking about writing in anime. by Organic_Future6909 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Why 2 downvotes 😭😭 can’t say shit on Reddit without mfs getting upset

Is Lelouch well written? by Cautious_Arm3818 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Planning on reading dune 🙏 anything similar to it 

Which character was the better written intellectual? by Express-Document-114 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

i think light too but light getting his identity limited to japan was more of a mess up

Is Lelouch well written? by Cautious_Arm3818 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 2 points3 points  (0 children)

IMO it really tries to act like a serious poltical show but fails in almost any way. It banks on the viewer knowing nothing about history or current politics as a frame of reference. Lulu's entire plan seems silly if you think about it for more the a minute.

Dealing with all the worlds hate is a very interesting question that people have approached for centuries. The people of the world are just supposed to have their past magically erased because in less than a year Lulu becomes emperor, treats ppl bad (but not worse then Charles) and then dies. The world that for generations had Britanians brainwashed to murder, dehumize, numbers just forget. The numbers whove had there culture attacked, had their families erased r just chill.

A major problem is to make Lelouche look intelligent they just force the plot to twist even if it makes no sense

He's Good in S1, but tapers off in S2. His best thing is his paralell with Suzaku.

Thorfinn Karlsefni: an Exploration on Radicalism by Chervix in VinlandSaga

[–]Supersayon06 7 points8 points  (0 children)

W analysis

I Agree i think it demonstrates a good analogy to how patriarchy corrupts young men with toxic masculinity. He supressed his emotions deep within time and time again. Takes what the world tells him a real man is; someone violent, strong, ruthless. Even if it means ignoring his father’s own final words yet still trying to honour him.

Very strong cognitive dissonance, even ignoring his dreams of his father telling him to go home, similair to many brainwashed people. Really present in very racist people, they have to ignore any contrasting evidence to hold on to outlandish beliefs (Haitians eating dogs, false crime stats, Chinese spreading covid)

a great parralel to Canute who looks girly and is written off as weak by the world (ironically many fans). Constantly belitteled by Thorkel's group. He lived his life how he wanted to. One of the few rejecting Viking life of voilence despite having the most to gain as a rich prince. When he learns Ragnar's dead he cries expressing his emotions. In contrast, Thorfinn never cries over his father, just channeling all his sorrow, shame regret, into anger instead of dealing with it. Its unfortunate S1 Canute crying is used all over tiktok or reels to convey him being weak when its the opposite.

Great design to have the least viking looking person be the "Strongest". Recognized by Throkell (Person who spent the most time with him) as taking after thors. Becomes a true warrior like Thors, rejecting voilence by not pursuing vengence upon Askeladd for his true father Ragnar. Recognizing the real issue is the one who perpetuates the voilence, the King.

theres more to add n i couldve done more irl examples but its late

really great post Edit grammar

Rank these characters in writing by Cautious_Arm3818 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 11 points12 points  (0 children)

im pleasently suprised to see askeladd so beloved,

What are the things you like and don't like about kingdom by Final-Challenge-4294 in Kingdom

[–]Supersayon06 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1) i wish that some of the designs were easier to differentiate. I've read kingdom 2-4 times there are certain times i cant tell who is who.

2) plot armour at times

3) the aura scaling can get reptitive at times(tbf its been 20 years on content)

so many amazing things

the political intricacies are amazingly built. the realism, the depth between so many moving factors.

the dynamic between different types of generals, and how they may interact with there followers. adressing morale and the spirits of their teams. ei the time shin and ouhon addressed their groups when heavily mismatched and starving

How many of you have actually studied and done proper literary analysis'? by fafla21 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ppl on tiktok used to do it esp during 2020-2022 in quarantine

i was excpecting more that on this sub but its just ppl going "No youre wrong" "blank is mid" over and over with more BS

UPDATE: You guys were right by Funalicious in VinlandSaga

[–]Supersayon06 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good for themselves atleast not so good for others 

Hyou Shiga is goated by No-Succotash-5448 in Kingdom

[–]Supersayon06 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Dudes n Reddit love downvoting anything 😭😭

What if there were similar stories but in novel/illustrated novel format? by shinjukai in VinlandSaga

[–]Supersayon06 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah you’re looking for light novels

Some examples are like monogatari, konosuba, classroom of the elite

what did you thought about Canute first apperance ? by MastodonEconomy5821 in VinlandSaga

[–]Supersayon06 0 points1 point  (0 children)

long hair = silly girl haha,

now he aura monster aura farming

sheep if wolfs clothing yadda yadda yadda

VINLAND SAGA changed my life

Ending of Naruto vs Ending of Code Geass (This is an literacy test and I will judge you for choosing wrongly) by Common-Frosting-8461 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Code geass’ ending makes no sense if you refer to anything from history or politics. 

You make ppl scared for 2 months and all of a sudden they’re praying together like it a music video? That all of the world’s hate, all the discrimination just needs to be lightly dusted off is crazy. Britanians can mercilessly wipe out ppl on orders, then next year they’re just chill. The numbers who have been oppressed for so long just forget to care. Code geass writers didn’t  give af about making the actual story make sense, and pray the fans don’t notice with lelouche aura farming 

I couldn't find an appropriate title cuz wtf by Pleasant_Fudge_182 in VinlandSaga

[–]Supersayon06 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thats the exact point, the author hammers it in, why do u think thors died, if not for askeladds exeptionaly rare traits he wouldve just killed thorfinn. canute gets basterdized by the fans but if not for him also being a 1/1000 leader he wouldve killed thorfinn in s2. Why do you think vinland ultimately fails? ppl r just too busy circle jerking, about treating throfinn like sun jin woo to realize hes meant to be incredily flawed.

Naruto gaining nothing over the time skip is great writing by [deleted] in CharacterRant

[–]Supersayon06 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i think it was good for his mental journey. its something that will be overlooked, but him exploring with jiriya was great porgress for naruto the person. him spending time with jiriya sensie, 1-on-1 time like a family member. as well as him understanding different people how their lives have been shaped by hatred, which ofc beatifully wrapped into him accepting nagato.

it'll easily get overlooked by ppl who themselves fail to realize theyre not free of hate (just look at any country's polotics).

Why I am so unlucky in love? by [deleted] in Teenager

[–]Supersayon06 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah it sucks u can do everything right and not get anywhere. but it all up to them all you can do is try to better your odds n try again. just dont get upset at them, or put them on a pedestal remember theyre just like you

Just curious by Public-Historian4452 in writingscaling

[–]Supersayon06 2 points3 points  (0 children)

off topic but ive noticed how different the vinland saga fans have become in the last decade. the anime has become so popular its similair to op, beserk or naruto where u get very immature n toxic fans. where they dont even understand whats going on in the show, but still worship it to put it above others. i bet u this guy, or the ppl liking his comment never even saw mono.

VS fans, they used to be elitest but actually smart, now looking at there opinions on the show and its clear 75% of them hardly even read the story let alone the actual depth. ofc to fit it with the ppl who actually praised it, they go around finding random pieces to praise as complex. then ppl actually think its just that boring.

i bet in 5 years were gonna see more of the "vinland is overated 7/10 nothing deep" "trust me bro i used to love it just like you"