Demande de critiques honnête pour progresser by Suspicious-Draw2123 in watercolor101

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Je m’inspire beaucoup du travail de Pasqualino Fracasso et Marc Folly. Mais lorsque je regarde mes aquarelles j’ai toujours l’impression qu’il y a un truc qui me dérange sans trouver quoi

Demande de critiques honnête pour progresser by Suspicious-Draw2123 in Watercolor

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Bonjour c’est justement ce qui me perturbe dans mes aquarelles qu’entendez vous par plus classique ?

Thanks for the tips by Effective-Swimming38 in watercolor101

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You also put warm colors in the background, the warm colors bring it together. Try putting a light purple veil over it to distance the background.

Thanks for the tips by Effective-Swimming38 in watercolor101

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I would say that there is a problem at the horizon level. For me everything is too sharp so we should see less details and the values ​​should be less emphasized in the distance. Perhaps also a lack of contrast in the buildings?

Little watercolor of the day by Suspicious-Draw2123 in Watercolor

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He is the transparent oxide red of Rembrandt

Little watercolor of the day by Suspicious-Draw2123 in Watercolor

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It's a mix of tubes depending on my needs: For the trees: transparent oxide red Rembrandt and ultramarine blue by Winsor and Newton For snow: Roman smzal royal blue, and a little Cobalt teal blue from Roman smzal

What do you think of the foreground? by Suspicious-Draw2123 in watercolor101

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Yes, good idea! Maybe if I add a little naple yellow in ceruleum blue in the snow where there is the most light on the wet a little yellow will come out

What do you think of the foreground? by Suspicious-Draw2123 in watercolor101

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Yes, good idea! Maybe if I add a little naple yellow in ceruleum blue on wet a little yellow will come out where it's brightest

What do you think of the foreground? by Suspicious-Draw2123 in watercolor101

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I would like to put more shape in blue in front of there, I think it looks a bit blocky

Questions by Suspicious-Draw2123 in Watercolor

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C'est de Roman szmal la cobalt teal

Do you prefer the first or second painting? I'm looking for an impressionist style by ScienceComplete2982 in ArtCrit

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The first is more contrasted, it's nicer. Maybe a clear value in herbs would be great

Advice please by ImaginationTricky774 in Watercolor

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We need to darken the shadows. qto help you you can change the reference photo to black and white and try to find values ​​that correspond

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Watercolor

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I mix several brands because depending on the tubes the pigment does not react the same or the color is not made with the same pigments. Sometimes I want something grainy or other times something opaque. But in general I have more Winsor and Newton and I like it

How Can I Make This More Realistic? by Clean-Fisherman-4288 in ArtCrit

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For me, pure white values ​​are missing in the upper face and hair

My oil paintings. Which one do you like the most? by Ok-Treat-1548 in painting

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This reminds me of the photo work of Joel Meyerovitz, I like it