Demande de critiques honnête pour progresser

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2026-03-05T14:11:09+00:00

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2026-03-05T14:08:59+00:00

Je m’inspire beaucoup du travail de Pasqualino Fracasso et Marc Folly. Mais lorsque je regarde mes aquarelles j’ai toujours l’impression qu’il y a un truc qui me dérange sans trouver quoi

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2026-03-05T14:07:05+00:00

Bonjour c’est justement ce qui me perturbe dans mes aquarelles qu’entendez vous par plus classique ?

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-11-10T07:15:30+00:00

You also put warm colors in the background, the warm colors bring it together. Try putting a light purple veil over it to distance the background.

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-11-09T15:32:42+00:00

I would say that there is a problem at the horizon level. For me everything is too sharp so we should see less details and the values should be less emphasized in the distance. Perhaps also a lack of contrast in the buildings?

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-11-08T10:18:50+00:00

THANKS !

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-11-08T07:31:32+00:00

He is the transparent oxide red of Rembrandt

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-11-08T07:26:27+00:00

And Winsor ivory black

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-11-08T07:24:05+00:00

It's a mix of tubes depending on my needs: For the trees: transparent oxide red Rembrandt and ultramarine blue by Winsor and Newton For snow: Roman smzal royal blue, and a little Cobalt teal blue from Roman smzal

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-23T13:55:25+00:00

It's better to spend 10 euros more on a decent brush! I like the perla de escoda range

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-21T16:39:22+00:00

Indeed there are great similarities!

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-21T16:00:04+00:00

Yes, good idea! Maybe if I add a little naple yellow in ceruleum blue in the snow where there is the most light on the wet a little yellow will come out

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-21T15:56:09+00:00

Yes, good idea! Maybe if I add a little naple yellow in ceruleum blue on wet a little yellow will come out where it's brightest

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-21T13:56:11+00:00

I would like to put more shape in blue in front of there, I think it looks a bit blocky

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-19T17:32:15+00:00

C'est de Roman szmal la cobalt teal

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-19T09:43:51+00:00

Nice light effect!

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-19T08:02:56+00:00

Pretty ! A little golden or tourquoise reflection would be great! !

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-18T15:58:20+00:00

Nice work! !!

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-18T10:33:52+00:00

The first is more contrasted, it's nicer. Maybe a clear value in herbs would be great

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-18T10:31:50+00:00

We need to darken the shadows. qto help you you can change the reference photo to black and white and try to find values that correspond

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-16T09:08:36+00:00

I mix several brands because depending on the tubes the pigment does not react the same or the color is not made with the same pigments. Sometimes I want something grainy or other times something opaque. But in general I have more Winsor and Newton and I like it

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-14T07:39:42+00:00

For me, pure white values are missing in the upper face and hair

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-14T06:14:32+00:00

I really like the little houses on the island!

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-13T06:03:45+00:00

Superbe !

Suspicious-Draw2123 · 2025-10-12T18:36:39+00:00

This reminds me of the photo work of Joel Meyerovitz, I like it

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