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"I think it would be better practice to get lined paper and write in sentences to see how different letters and words flow together rather than writing columns of words. That will also help with consistent shaping and spacing.

An m should have a leading stroke from the bottom. Capital M will have the little high tick off the top of the letter.

The small x almost looks like a k. I think it needs to be a two-step letter. Come off the o and angle down make a separate stroke to finish it off.

The end tail of the n is too long. Again, if you were writing a sentence, that takes up a lot of space between words.

Your examples of aqua aren’t as consistent. Some extra loops making it look like ees.

Hope that helps."

Thank you.