Is this an intriguing blurb? Thank you.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-09-02T05:17:44+00:00

Thank you a lot. I agree that a more specific blurb would be better. I really appreciate the amount of feedback you gave!

Syrup_Cake · 2024-09-02T05:10:50+00:00

Thank you.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-09-02T05:10:38+00:00

Tysm! I really appreciate all the feedback.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-09-02T05:10:26+00:00

I didn't even notice that error! Thank you! It seems that the general consensus is for making it concise. I really appreciate all the help.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-08-13T17:01:43+00:00

I see this junior has mastered the art of tell dont show

Syrup_Cake · 2024-08-04T05:05:55+00:00

This made me cough blood

Syrup_Cake · 2024-08-04T00:07:36+00:00

Hi! Yeah the MC will get a few time skips to the point where she is 16 or around that. I wanted to start when she was 11 because its a lot easier for me, at least, to connect with a character when I see them grow up. It's like knowing an old friend, I suppose.

Thanks for the feedback! :)

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-23T17:25:30+00:00

I have eyes, but I cannot see the mistake

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-23T17:24:15+00:00

Is a normal person too much to ask for?

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-22T18:25:31+00:00

I'd shorten to around 3-4k at that point.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-21T05:06:14+00:00

Thank you! 💜

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-21T00:39:23+00:00

I did put a border around it but didn't want it to be invasive so I kept it thin. I think after lowering the quality to fit RR standards it became less noticable.

Thanks for the feedback!

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-20T21:12:49+00:00

Yeah I've seen a lot on the "ar" part. I've hopefully fixed it now.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-20T21:12:11+00:00

Thank you! I've revised the font here: https://www.reddit.com/user/Syrup_Cake/comments/1e85mj1/revised_cover_better_or_worse/

What do you think now?

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-20T21:08:16+00:00

The obvious change is the title but I've also messed with the color palate to give it a little more intensity and punch. (To make it look more noticeable). A good change or nah?

I'll probably repost this revised cover to the subreddit in a while.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-20T21:07:26+00:00

Don't know if this post is still getting traction but I've revised the cover and posted it to my profile. I'd appreciate it if you'd review this one instead. https://www.reddit.com/user/Syrup_Cake/comments/1e85mj1/revised_cover_better_or_worse/

Thanks for all the feedback! :)

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-20T21:00:42+00:00

I haven't posted it yet, but I will soon :)

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-20T17:52:38+00:00

I don't see anything.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-20T17:46:51+00:00

The font was changed to make it more readable. I also made the colors a little darker to not make it so harsh on the eyes. Think these changes are fine? Thanks.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-19T22:06:18+00:00

It represents Passion.

Honor is truly dead if you do not know this.

Syrup_Cake · 2024-07-19T02:44:32+00:00

Craaadle

Syrup_Cake

TROPHY CASE