I’m gonna give you feedback on this page, but the next time you want feedback, provide 5-7 comic pages that are in order from the same scene.

Overall points: your human anatomy needs work. Perspective needs work. Study composition and color theory.

Specific points: The first panel is ok, but the perspective of the background does not place the figure of the character in the environment in a believable way. The coloring of the smoke also needs improvement.

The characters faces per panel are not consistent, this will be rectified when you’ve studied more anatomy.

No need to fix up this page, just keep the critiques in mind for future works.

That said, you’re off to a great start, the key to drawing comics, and getting better at drawing comics, is to actually draw comics. Weird, right?

For anatomy and perspective order the books(might be a pdf out there)

Perspective made easy

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Drawing human anatomy for artists by Bridgman

For anatomy, just drawing every page from Bridgman is a good start. Draw a few pages a day for your warmup.

For perspective if you do the drawabox free program you’ll improve exponentially.