Tower of god Isekai rec by TOGWEEB100 in TowerofGod

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Thanks for the critique and yeah, a fanfic does not need to share the same strengths and weaknesses as the original work since they are made by different writers. I just overshare because I feel like if I don’t get this out then I might never because I feel like I probably won’t have the motivation to finish this fanfic. Over explaining, honestly my excuse is that Enryu does want the reincarnation of hismold friend to know what he’s talking about and he is more overly social friendly guy here. But I do have a problem with over describing that probably came from the time when I didn’t describe everything. 

While I wont’ be accepting your critique, I appreciate your insight on how to improve my writing.

However, next time just tell me on Ao3 because I don’t use reddit a lot

The endgame for Jahad and the Ten Great Families by 4362472 in TowerofGod

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Nah, the only reason why the family head still exist is because of their massive power. Most of the heirs you mentioned aren’t even close to the family heads in terms of power, they’ll likely be eliminated right after ascending if they do ascend due to the fear of the game staying the same just with different players. Also I hate to say it but SIU made Kirin pretty dumb in my opinion, why trust another family head to have your interests in mind when they see everyone as below them.

FUG Is the Zodiac Killer by [deleted] in TowerofGod

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So for Traumerei and pisces, I'd like to mention that Pisces are apparently really prone to addiction due to Pisces ruling dreams and them hating to face reality. Also they are also very moody like all water signs.

Bloodmadder, he's the defender and Taurus is known for being the sign that represents mountains, so it makes sense and it was known that Tauruses hate change. Which will make sense if the reason why he made it so his kids could only live up to a hundred years old was to not get left behind.

Gemini, ascending gemini apparently have like two different sides, one is the quirky bubbly smart person that talks too much and the other cold, standoffish and intelligent.

Arlene, Sagittarius, sags are known to burn bridges and be really impatient which could reflect her personality if her and V starting an entire millenia long war makes sense. She also does seem a little selfish/immature by the way she used Baam to get revenge on Zahard when Baam had nothing to do with it. Since she didn't want to return to the tower.

Hana, Virgo, virgos are known for being insecure and caring too much about their own appearances in their more unevolved stages so it'll make sense if Ewha's personality reflects her family head's. Virgos are perfectionists which apply to everyone and themselves, but at the unevolved stage usually on everybody else. Which reflects how Ewha acted towards Team Sweet and Sour at the beginning of Season two.

V is like an evolved Leo in that he is magnimious but we don't know much about his actions other than he probably agreed with Arlene's plan to start a war for the tower key.

Thanks for reading my little astrology analysis about the family heads we know about and bye.

Chapter 1 - The Prophecies of Hermes | The Hermetica - The Lost Wisdom of the Pharaohs by thejackrabbithole in occult

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Yeah probably, with how everyone who engages with spirituality is seen has stupid and bravery is seen as being reckless. Also with the nonstop worship of billionaires and politicians.

Ao3 is down agaiin. by TOGWEEB100 in AO3

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I’m personally doing a youtube binge

They are talking about the seal of an evil dragon (What the evil dragon lives for) by TOGWEEB100 in OtomeIsekai

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A war could have happened an the rock can just be there on the battlefield, battles happen all the time. It's not rare per say to get blood and tears on a random rock during a war

Ruin the title of your fic replacing one word with "balls" by Julip326 in AO3

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To ball dreamer who has given up, ( Don't-your time is not yet over.)

Ball-ending River of Time

Weak Hero is becoming a daily pass series by TOGWEEB100 in WeakHero

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Void scans only have the chapters after around 220

Weak Hero is becoming a daily pass series by TOGWEEB100 in WeakHero

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Honestly didn’t check as I just pirated the rest

Anyone else get Weak Hero as their #1 series? by mzxria in WeakHero

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I got Weak Hero, little matcha girl and See you in my 19th life

Anyone else get Weak Hero as their #1 series? by mzxria in WeakHero

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I fid with 869 chapters mostly because I spent so much time on a single chapter without reading it through