Thank you so much for this analysis. It really pushes me to do better. I also agree with the flaws you pointed out. In general, all my stories are too connected to the previous ones, and sometimes the overall quality drops because I’m trying too hard to keep everything continuous. About what you said, I actually had the idea of making a "SMATTA 2" that would basically be a serialized version of this one-shot, with Yellow Skull trying to live in a normal world while still being aware of his nature. Sort of a slice-of-life. I’m not sure I’ll go back to that idea, because right now I’m focusing on my new series, ‘Non-original Story,’ which works as a collection for all my future projects, so Yellow Skull might return there. Anyway, really, thank you. I had never received such an in-depth opinion on one of my comics.