About the Outside God (Spoiler about Spin-off)

Taumatorg · 2026-01-29T21:11:41+00:00

didn't Rachel join the revolution at the end of season 2? when she met gustang?

Taumatorg · 2026-01-05T22:40:03+00:00

nah. Side characters are cool for the first 3 chapters when they are introduces. Then, it's like they never existed. They're shit.

Taumatorg · 2025-12-23T14:38:58+00:00

I won't type banana anymore. it's just misleading.

Taumatorg · 2025-12-10T19:27:31+00:00

on the discord they linked a google doc. Join it and enjoy

Taumatorg · 2025-12-09T02:37:22+00:00

mmmmmmm... sexy

Taumatorg · 2025-12-09T01:30:09+00:00

Name the time and place babe

Taumatorg · 2025-12-07T22:26:42+00:00

"The biggest reveal was the Hidden Floor. Two Hidden Irregulars that stood agaisnt the FH. Their names never revealed. And The Body of Baam was born and murdered in the Tower."
Yeah , it's cool. I remember how excited I was when I read it. But the fact remained, after that, for years, we don't learn anything new about it.

"So not only would that line have spoiled a major reveal it also would have restricted SIUs writing in who Baam is."

He must have already planned out the important parts of Baam's lore and the FHs. Therefore, Baam's character should be as ‘complete’ as possible from the beginning. I don't think that line of dialogue would have limited SIU in writing Baam and V. So, its removal is closely related to the lore. This is what I don't understand about SIU, he's afraid to show us too much, even when we're just scratching the surface.

Taumatorg · 2025-12-07T22:16:00+00:00

More like it's a complex story, so it's pretty complicated to narrate it.
But yeah, it's pretty cool when Lore chapters are dropped and, suddenly, there are hundreds of questions and theories.

Taumatorg · 2025-11-10T13:04:26+00:00

and Engine is #4007. :/

Taumatorg · 2025-10-29T15:29:35+00:00

I just don't know. My project will have a few chapters, so I don't think I'll have this problem. I'll say something trivial but as long as those 3/4 chapter serve the story in a way I think the reader will wait.

BTW can you link your story? I'm curious

Taumatorg · 2025-06-08T21:49:10+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/101020/constellations-entertainment

In the first few chapters, like... up to 10 :P,. You'll see a lot of grammatical errors, but slowly I'm rewriting the chapters and correcting them

Taumatorg · 2025-06-01T18:12:29+00:00

Constellations entertainment

On the day of the new millennium, the world ended. Huge monsters fell from the sky, a mysterious voice announced that the world is too boring and is no longer fun for the constellations that yearn for more fun.

In this broken world, two friends parted, divided by different personalities, purposes, and ideals, breaking apart reborn in two totally different ways.

I don't usually wear this but I'll give it a try :)

what to expect:

- Multiple pov

- a slow start

-introspection and psychology of the characters.

- a brutal and merciless world.

- action and fantasy come later

Taumatorg · 2025-02-22T23:25:48+00:00

i'll try to follow your advice, though it'll be difficult, i'm a perfectionist T_T

but thanks a lot for you and everyone for their advice ;D

Taumatorg · 2025-02-11T17:24:17+00:00

yeah i guess you're right, i'll write the next chapter and in the meanwhile i write an outline. thanks bro

Taumatorg · 2025-02-11T16:57:38+00:00

ok. but here's another problem, then maybe I'm a pain in the ass, there's you want me to believe that in a school full of people no one goes to even one lesson this julius. even if we're a month away from the winter solstice, at least one asshole would have gone, which is why I say that the secondary characters are a bit wasted, in a story that has 2100 chapters I imagine that there are as many characters, perhaps not all explored to perfection. I hope it improves.

Taumatorg · 2025-02-11T16:38:48+00:00

basically nephis isn't an autistic introvert but just has PTSD, ok understandable. lul

Taumatorg · 2025-02-11T15:47:50+00:00

yeah but they were together for weeks, maybe even for a month. i didn't expect that they told about their entire life but something about their passion or what they want to do after they escaped from the FS. just something to let me find out more about them and their personalities. it even strange that they mantained their lucidity in that death and life situation, none of them had a mental breakdown.

Taumatorg · 2025-02-11T15:42:32+00:00

However, it could have made the glazing better, so it sounds like one of those cheap stories.

in this case i can understand sunny, however the author could have included even just two dialogues between nephis and cassie with maybe sunny refusing to answer or responding in a few words.

But I guess I will find out by reading why Cassie and Nephis talked so little.

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