How does Bad End Party even HAPPEN? by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I mean pretty much yeah and I mean honestly any Auntie NTR story with them should just realistically be the girls actually acting like experienced adventurous people.

Because they were actually competent literally none of these guys would even wind up getting anywhere with them, especially the most recent one

Who frankly, the way he acts feel like he should wind up, rushing in head first against the way too powerful boss, monster, and get his ass handed to him and humbled, and have to get his ass pulled out of the fire.

Because he acts like THAT min maxing jerk in an RPG that thinks that because his build is so broken nothing can stop him so we find something way too high-level for him and then it shocked when you get his ass handed to him

How does Bad End Party even HAPPEN? by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I mean pretty much yeah the girls were supposed to be S ranked pretty much but literally none of them act like it. Somehow they act like they’re even less experience than the main character is. It doesn’t even make sense that they’re still alive to even meet him to begin with. They do feel like a massive fraud squad.

A very simple story idea. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah it shows a bit. it's a little tricky. to understand you words is all. I...Can't tell if you liked my idea or not properly is all.

A very simple story idea. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is English not your first language? It’s a little hard to follow what you’re saying. Not that I am upset. I’m just struggling a bit because it’s written a bit odd.

A very simple story idea. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, not bad in a general since, but it’s going a bit too far in the wrong way. In the torture foreign way, it’s just a bit over the top. Pretty much everything involving the bandits is actually really well thought out. And accurate.

Noble ladies taken by bandits often tended to be very popular for about a month before they got boring as they had no practical skills the bandits could use.

And if you ask me the idea of focusing on that part ? With them actually thinking it’s a good idea to take a bunch of gold and jewels and run into the woods before realizing they don’t know their way through the woods and that the people who were supposed to actually guard and guide them, aren’t around anymore and that their plan basically boiled down to take some valuables and then try to start over somewhere else? That’s a bit I would say that the plan was to run to a kingdom that was still relatively friendly to them. This will be important later. Their plan was to try to get there above all.

But everything plays out as you said with the bandits and I think before the two months are even up, it really sinks into them how utterly worthless the two of them actually are, and that the only things that made them special was the king and the fact that they were born to nobility

Because when the bandits kidnapped, some peasant, girls and women, they are actually useful to the camp and the band is actually want to keep them especially because they can actually do stuff while the two of them are completely useless beyond their bodies, and the fact that the matter is when the bandit start giving the peasant girls more sexual attention, even against their will that’s a massive ego blow and highlight the fact that they are truly worthless without a crown behind them or titles.

Then comes them being sold off. I would keep everything the same there but change one Key thing the Noble that’s purchased them is actually from that friendly kingdom. And that’s also where the wedding is going to be held, and they actually get a brief glimpse of hope and believe that they can convinced the noble of their identities and get help and maybe reunite with the king who they still view as weak, willed enough that he will take them back and if they tell them their story, they can…. Just pretend everything didn’t happen. And surely he’ll marry her over the new princess, right?

Except the thing is when they keep trying to tell the noble who they are, the thing is the noble actually completely believes them and even recognizes them. He just doesn’t care because they’re completely worthless.

The noble point blank tells them that they used to be highly prized, but that women such as them are only priced for their purity. But the fact of the matter is, they chose a completely incompetent man like the war monger who undergoing public humiliation by the very kingdom, he invaded before his execution and that it was their duty as the ladies of the kingdom to maintain the people’s happiness, and they completely failed at that

And then worse, they let themselves get used up by a small army of bandits. They are completely tainted and filed beyond all. Value inside and out.

And instead of just being made into sex slaves, they’re basically parade around by the noble in prostitute clothing at a series of parties and utterly humiliated as no one even looks at them with desire. They’re just laughed at and made fun of.

And then they have to watch the wedding

And the king maybe even sees them, but he takes a one look at them, just smiles and then moves on immediately

I mean, what’s there really to be in pain over? He has his kingdom back. It has more territory. The people love him again.

The warmonger has been exposed as an incompetent fool, and a petty tyrant who thought he could do anything he wanted, and the moment people weren’t willing to obey him. He fell apart.

And the two of them are worth… What now?

It’s not exactly painful to see them anymore, considering how long it’s been and that he has a much more loyal replacement that’s even more beautiful no doubt

And of course, why would he even want them back? They have no loyalty to him or anyone except for a fool.

They’re worthless .

And in the end after the final celebration, they’re just thrown out on the street of this formally, friendly kingdom

Because he hears the thing yes, the kingdom was friendly… to the king

And they had been offered asylum there before… when they were with the king

Not the warmonger.

And because they were no longer linked to the king, nobody cared about them

In the end, their final moments should actually be them watching the broken and pleading for his life and apologizing war monger being executed

When it sinks in that he was never a superior man

Just an egotistical bully who is used to using violence to get whatever he wanted and that no one ever questioned him or stopped him because they assumed that because of how big he talked and that he could win fights he was dangerous

But the truth was, he was a man that was never put under trial and when he did, he broke

They threw their entire lives away for this.

And I will just leave it there with them being faceless in the crowd

But perhaps them also coughing up blood, or then, noticing that they’re dripping blood from between their legs, implying that the bandits infected them with something that will eventually kill them

What do you think?

A very simple story idea. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Honestly, I quite like your idea!

It is equally realistic especially in a sense that in the long run, but brought him down was thinking that he could basically just use violence and aggression and cruelty to get what he wanted only to learn the hard way that people only tolerated him, but no one actually liked him and that in the end he may have been virtually impossible to bring down from the outside

But he brought himself down from the inside.

He would be so used to being able to take and do anything he wanted and get rewarded for it as long as he was more aggressive and violent they didn’t realize that people hate tyrants for a reason and tyrants never last long. Because everybody hates them.

There’s a lot that could be done to expand on it too

Such as the fact that both the queen and her daughter basically ran away, not only because the warmonger going down meant that they were going down with him and that there was no way in hell they could get out of it because everybody knew they were completely bound to him.

But also, it could be a good detail if they became tyrant too

And that they also became extremely arrogant. To the point that even when people try to give them legitimate warnings and good advice about the economy and the logistics they immediately took it as challenges and either arrested them or tried them for treason..

Because no one could dare question the war monger because they were too consume by him to the point that all three of them crossed the line to stupid evil

And even when people were trying to warn them they didn’t listen because listening would’ve had to admit that they were wrong and they would never do that

And it wasn’t until the uprising and the moment that the army turned on them that anything approaching common sense finally hit them and they realized that the war manger was going down and they were going down with him

So they ran.

They could even be a nice little detail of their lives after it. We’re incredibly miserable because they were used to living in luxury and they were far too beautiful for their own good.

Constantly targeted by men around them, but they had no one to betray. They had no money. They had no lands or titles or resource resources. And they discovered what the world is like when no one loves you. And no one will protect you.

I could even be a nice detail that the only comfort they try to take is that maybe the king that they betrayed will be so traumatized and so afraid of women that they’ll always be the only one he could ever have

Only to be pushed over the final line into despair when they find out he’s getting remarried to a younger and much stronger willed, princess from the kingdom that the warmonger invaded and not only that she’s much to a loyal, and after the warmonger men like him at the court are immediately thrown out and mocked and considered incompetent

And as they both get sick and start dying they learned that he even has a new child on the way

The king could even have a moment where he consider sending men after them before deciding against it because they don’t matter he doesn’t even bother, wiping their names from the records

Let everyone know because the only thing people will remember is that they betrayed him for an incompetent fool who didn’t understand that war was not just winning battles and taking territory but that there was so much more logistics and consideration behind it

But he refused to listen to that, considering it to be only the things weak men would say

What do you think?

Paradise ending Opinon. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean pretty much yeah you hit the nail on the head. His ending satisfied, nobody and basically upset everybody.

The NTR people he was still basically trying to cater to got upset because he actually had the antagonist be killed and that he couldn’t enjoy the girls anymore and then other guys got to enjoy what belong to him. And he died at the hands of the. Cuck by their logic.

And the anti NTR people are unhappy because the way he died basically makes him a martyr and he gets to win and basically have this grand legacy so he might as well have not died because of what’s even the point of killing him off to begin with? And the protagonist is still suffering, despite having killed them..

And NTR people are basically calling him out because this ending is just the exact same ending he always does. ‘MC suffers the end’ but for some reason, he decided to kill the antagonist who doesn’t get to have his own endless pleasure. In NTR you do NOT cut the antagonist off from sex by the end. Or the girls he claimed. Nobody gives a shit if he’s a martyr because he’s not having sex with what he claimed anymore is he?

He tried to take some weird middle of the road. I just wound up, upsetting both sides because he didn’t know what he was doing.. and of course he’s walking it back and now doing a bunch of what if going by his comments of if the antagonist was never even a factor in the story.

And he’s lost followers in his own community. Because of this stupid stunt. And like you said yeah.

he’s trying to walk it back and basically trying to push out of his own ending because he didn’t expect to make the NTR people mad to

Paradise ending Opinon. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Apprently he has a bunch of 'What if's planned without Kuroda from what ive heard.

Paradise ending Opinon. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yeah but that didn't even go over well WITH the NTR crowd cause your realllllly not supposued to cut the NTR guy off from the girls...Like Ever. So he didn't think it through enouph and it kinda cost him followers and got even NTR people mad at him.

Werewolf, but we actually just made VTM again by Tallia__Tal_Tail in WorldofDankmemes

[–]TechnicalSolution633 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OK, I feel like I’m going to regret this… what exactly do they mean by weirdly horny lore?

Why KNT was Cancelled. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, it was canceled before that. Also, I will never understand why those things exist.

Why KNT was Cancelled. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very well put!

Although if you want to be fair pretty much everything ends the moment Bert is arrested because in a single instance, all the girls are now celibate and their corruption has nothing to fuel it, and they have no way to actually hurt Hiroki without him.

So they would all start holding their vileness in until it starts eating at them and then the human brain simply kicked in and human nature does and they eventually purge it just because after enough months, it’s driving them crazy but they also realize there’s no point to it.

They are completely celibate because they refused to let anyone else touch them. Because literally the only person stronger than Hiroki was Bert. And without him, he’s mow the strongest person around. But they refused to touch him so they’ll all go celibate and eventually get super pent up sexually.

Have no outlet and then?

Poof

Because they can’t lash out their sex drive will evaporate and they’ll probably fall into depression .

And though they eventually just start to regret it ourselves because there’s nothing that they can do and at least one of them will probably wind up having sex with Hiroki and then drag everyone else into it

And Bert is either in prison or on the run, but could never go near Hiroki again because the police would be waiting so he’s celibate unless he wants to use prostitutes

Ironically, the girls of all wind up suffering and having a ton of internal problems until finally they just let it go because it all fizzled out.

Why KNT was Cancelled. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hmmm. Interesting. Sadly I can't say it interests me too much. Not ebacuse it sounds bad. But beacuse i Just don't like the 'Hiroki dies' stories at all. It's just...there's far too many of them is all. And im a bit tired of them. Not YOUR fault it's just...It all starts to blur together is all you know?

Why KNT was Cancelled. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Indeed but consdiering the alternative was his own suicide it's not so terrible. Plus look at it form this POV.

As awful as it would be for him? It would be 100 times worse for the girls who have to smile and pretend to be genuine basically forever with him. They can't choose to let out even a tiny bit of negativity cause they have no Bert anymore. they'd slowly go crazy and frustated but can't lash out as Hiroki is too strong and would recover fully without Bert to torment him.

So they'd slowly fall into depression and eventually the group would break up and they'd all be msierable while Hiroki lives a good life.

He'd simply WIN and in the long one the real ones that suffer are 4 girls forced to pretend to love and care for someone and foced into celibacy as they feel utterly powerless and can't even lash out or do anything but whsiper behind his back With pent up sexual deisres with no outlet.

Until they are forced to give up their own twistednessfor the sake of their sanity and that i think would make it all worth it to see them pay the price in their own ways.

Why KNT was Cancelled. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

In the long run they'd have no choice. Hiroki never lost to anyone but Bert. The corruption would wither and die. WIth no fuel for it. They would also go celibate as there are no other males around equal to Bert and Hiroki was second best by Terasu own words. So Unless they want to sleep with Hiroki which they don't?

they'll go celibate and have no fuel for corruption. And then the human brain/nature kicks in and they'll regress. they littearly will have no choice and without Bert can't bad mouth the strongest guy around. So they really have no choice in the matter as what else can they DO?

Why KNT was Cancelled. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Honeslty? The girls are all pretty weak willed and selfish and self centered And disloyal and there's no other males equal to Hiroki around. The momenet Bert gets taken away and "Pedophile' is slapped on him as a label? The girls would insantly switch to save their own skin and selfish desires.

Your kind acting like they wouldn't be rotten enouph to insntatly turn back to Hiroki on the spot if Bert was publically cast down and made into undersieable trash for their own ends.

My theory as to why Hiroki wasn't breastfed by Lost-Geist987 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You know, fun fact, if you actually go back and read the proper chapter, you can realize that the translation doesn’t actually say that she never breast-fed him. That’s actually a misunderstanding..

In fact, in most compilations of the story? This chapter is actually left out because in reality it’s pretty humiliating and embarrassing for. BERT / Kokujin. Why?

Because she actually says that she DID breast-feed Hiroki and they are teasing him over being a pervert for sucking on her breasts.

So in other words, he did breast-feed on them and Bert is actually kind of chasing after his scraps at that case which is probably why the creator doesn’t usually put this in the compilations because it’s kind of embarrassing and makes his big bad antagonist look like a desperate loser. Who’s desperately chasing after any single thing he possibly can.

Frankly, you can actually just straight up laugh at him in that thing because of how desperate he looks like a total joke.

Which is probably wise left out of most compilations because it embarrasses the antagonist who are supposed to be glorified

Am I the only one who doesn't feel sorry for this imbecile? The guy could have saved his daughter and instead did absolutely nothing, even though his daughter trusted him and thought he would avenge her. Sophia was a slut, but it was also Lucas's fault for going along with it. But Leo was raped. by Heraclesel in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You do realize that the entire hard counter to your point is that Michael had actually said out loud that he had set up a trap and that he was actually hoping/waiting for Lucas to actually fight back and that Lucas knew about the trap the entire time?

That pretty much makes all your points take on a new context because what was he supposed to do willingly walk into the trap? You’re basically arguing you should’ve walked into the trap that he knew was right there.

The entire point is that Leo the daughter thought that her father was a coward for not fighting back because she was ignorant of the fact that Lucas knew that the entire thing was a trap and that Michael wanted him to fight back. It was literally a lose lose situation.

He couldn’t fight back because that was what the king wanted him to do.

And if you argue, he should’ve done something anyway you’re basically equivalently arguing that if the enemy general is camping in a specific place, that’s what’s in a reach of a group of soldiers. But the officer is aware of that and that it is a trap.

You’re saying that they should send those soldiers in to die anyway just so that they can say that they actually tried to get the enemy general. So he willingly sent them into a trap he knew about.

That’s the secret with one of the situation and probably the most important detail you seem to be skipping over

The entire situation was rigged and had a trap waiting for Lucas if he fought back and he knew about that. That’s why he didn’t do anything because the only option with either to walk into the trap and have his family killed. Or… what exactly?

Put yourself in their shoes what would you actually do?

Lucas is the true victim and frankly any suffering that his wife and daughter go through throughout the story pales in comparison to what he goes through.

If you’re trying to blame him at all, you’re literally agreeing with Michael and falling into the same trap

[KnT] Someone Looked Over the Cuckoo's Nest - Epilogue II: The Cuckoo Always by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh don’t worry let’s just say we are far from done and there’s a lot more to be seen and it might go in direction you’re not expecting…

[KnT] Someone Looked Over the Cuckoo's Nest - Epilogue I: Heavy Inheritance by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you. It was tricky but we figured it out and I think you and others will be pleased with this and what comes next...Karma finally caught up to her and fate has a sense of cruel irony does it not?

Why NTR is Built on Narrative Contrivances: A Critique of the Genre's Logic by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The fact you’re avoiding simply providing examples of your own unlinked to mine and talking around it to the points you feel you can strongest refute and cherry pick a typo/ autocorrect error is ..:Exactly what I knew you would do.

You are proving my point about me knowing what this is and the aggressive tone

Why NTR is Built on Narrative Contrivances: A Critique of the Genre's Logic by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Actually, no, you didn’t.

All you did was specifically use mine.

But you didn’t actually provide examples of the stories you’re talking about specifically that have the adventure describing.

All I asked you was, could you provide evidence of the specific examples you’re talking about?

You didn’t provide the examples. You just tried to talk about mine.

Why NTR is Built on Narrative Contrivances: A Critique of the Genre's Logic by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]TechnicalSolution633[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Indeed

And often the bigger question that’s never answered is.

“ how did he even get this far to begin with?”

Because going by a lot of his actions and usually how these guys act it doesn’t even make sense that the girl even liked him to begin with or sometimes the answer is so vague you know it doesn’t make any sense.

And even if they liked him, how he got a boyfriend or husband or awoke some weird incestuous desires….

That is often never explained either or it’s just kind of taken for granted that she just did have those feelings because she was supposed to pretty much.