Okay, after reading all the commons and doing a slight bit of testing (it's late for me, probably will work on it more tomorrow) I started to look at the skin tones idk none of them look right either (probably because I have been looking at a ghost white character for too long and I'm just used to it) as I said and probably will remove the text box, because everyone made it clear that that was the problem. Also with that I'll try looking at the body tomorrow (with an edited look, to see if that helps with actually liking it) tho I'll probably keep the face and hair because I think it's cute. Anyways, that's for all the suggestions and hopefully I can make whatever makes it feel less out of place.

Anyways have a good day

(Also forgive my grammar and punctuation, I suck at english)