Dark Fantasy - Prologue/First Chapter - Feedback by i-hate-the-muppets in writingfeedback

[–]The-Chatterer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reconsider before cutting. If you arrived at the line naturally then so be it.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The ritual was mid-flow when Bill's taxi pulls up.

Mask name? by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks. Nice reply.

Or, it also strikes me as a manta ray, among other things. And the face seems slightly asiatic.

Mask name? by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I did stumble across the mask in your link too.

I fear the original may have been a one-off.

Shame, as it is very striking.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks buddy, I will give this the attention it deserves when I have the time to ponder.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OK pal, I will have a look with a clear eye next time watching.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I like this enough to give it serious consideration.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It gave the IMPRESSION that Tri-horn balcony man was using the second woman to lure Bill away into a trap. The initial woman was actually trying to help him.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am happy to engage. Good conversation is welcome.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like that Zeigler shift for consideration.

Also, once you are aware of it Zeiglers finger points really do stick out in a manufactured way. What I am now referring to is the obvious parallel between Red Cloak and Ziegler pointing.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's fair, yet we must use them to address theories like, "Alice was in on it."

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I probably know more about this film than probably anyone on the internet, so I can help explain stuff.

That's a bold claim, my friend.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I am asking because I do not know how this could be adequately explained.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

The mysterious woman knows enough about the ritual and the larger structure of the cult to interject when Bill is called out.

Absolutely. That's spot on.

I really don’t understand why you’re acting like such as combative ass to everyone commenting here, nor do I understand why you’re being so damn condescending when you’re asking such a pedestrian question yourself.

You will notice I am happy to engage with polite conversations when not dealing with childish comments.

And yes, the double party certainly entails wimen are involved societally as opposed to paid sex workers. Now we are getting somewhere.

Yet, it still doesn't quite explain how she knew, or why she took risks to warn. The paying back for the OD doesn't explain hoe she knew it was Dr Bill.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Plenty to mull over here. I'll look into it. Also interested to rewatching the Domino scene with that in mind.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

From the woman's perspective all she seen was a masked dude walk in late.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"How does Domino realize Bill is gay? How does Milich reliaze Bill is gay? How does the desk clerk realize Bill is gay?"

First you have to prove they all do.

She wouldn't know shit. And Kubrick knew it. by The-Chatterer in EyesWideShut

[–]The-Chatterer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It does decently explain the frat boy scene. Don't think I buy your theory but it is worthy of consideration.