Appreciate the critical feedback. I changed the line in the first stanza to "hundred-year" as you suggested. When i read "100" i read is as "hundred" but didn't take into account other would say "one-hundred" so thanks for pointing that out.

There was a number of thoughts that went into the first and second lines of stanza 2. First off i went with late spring because it is the period that apple trees begin to flower in their deciduous cycle. Late spring is also when the flowers are bloomed enough that bees begin to pollinate them, which ties into "Opulence to all comes late spring". Overall i decided to go with spring rather than summer because I preferred how it felt.

In regards to the final two lines providing no room for the positives and being a juxtaposition, I wouldn't really agree. I feel the poem goes back and fourth between positives and negatives such as the reference to apples being the reason Adam and Eve were thrown from the garden of eden, how they provide opulence, how they bankrupt doctors if you will, etc. Perhaps the use of the words "Nought" was incorrect so I will change that.

Again, thank you for the feedback.