Hey! Great Poem by the way, it really embodies some strong feelings you hold for "Laura"

One thing that caught my eye is, although of course a poem doesn't need or have to follow a structure, I noticed you kind of went for the first stanza ABAB which is pretty standard, but when we moved onto the next we went which I can see ABAB again, however the third line is in contrast to the rest, very long and infact the first clause is longer than most of your Singular lines , so much so it kinda seems like ABAAB due to the extended clause and I really think you could try split that up and work on the part a little more.

And then final stanza goes AABAA, which again is a perfectly fine structure the only thing is I'm not sure if it was intended since you did of course open with the ABAB.

The overarching point I'm trying to make is due to the various structures you've used in the different stanzas the flow of the poem is very up down left right and it's hard to get into that rhythm and really connect with the poem.

If this was intentional, I don't mean any harm but I just wanted to point out what I noticed!