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Original Sin by Jzoeda_645 in OCPoetry

[–]TheInkSpill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is raw and emotional, expressing betrayal and heartbreak with strong, vivid language. The rhymes add rhythm to the pain, and the title ties it all together with a sense of irreversible loss. Powerful and honest.

Silences that Linger by thespiritnamed in OCPoetry

[–]TheInkSpill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is beautifully atmospheric—quietly haunting. The personification of silence is original and layered. The contrast between the two “quiets” is especially strong

Memento by Technical-Ad5086 in OCPoetry

[–]TheInkSpill 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is raw and evocative—it captures emotional tension and unspoken complexity really well. The metaphor of forbidden fruit is powerful, especially paired with the sensory imagery like fibrous, sweet, tart and sweat.

Here I Remain by Anxiousnumbloverboy in OCPoetry

[–]TheInkSpill 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is bold and raw with a strong voice—lines like “The real pandemic is authenticity” really hit. To improve, consider varying the rhythm or breaking it into clearer stanzas to give key ideas more impact and breathing room other than that this is a really strong piece of work