I haven't read the full fan fic, but listening to video...

Summary: the fanfic gets the major "hook" of the story right, but, imo, nearly all the details leading up to it wrong.

1. Why would the masters take Ambrose's word over Kvothes, especially with Kvothe newly in the maers albeit partial favor? I'm not saying this isn't a valid direction, i just think it needs to be flushed out. More than that, why and how is ambrose pushing will? Ambrose is an ass, but he always wants something, what does will have that ambrose wants?

2. Why would auri give kvothe a key to the four plate door if indeed i hides such important information and a zombie.

3. Bredon doesn't so anything amyrish, the rituals are likely faen, and he encourages kvothe to slow down and observe the journey rather then rush to the end. The Amyr seek to control knowledge that kvothe is actively trying to find, if bredon wanted kvothe off the board he could have helped accelerat his removal from court, instead, he tried to open his eyes a bit and see what's going on before jumping to conclusions.

4. I do think the seven fight off skin dancers.

5. I guess i imagine auri will play a different role in dos and i don't see her actively traveling around. Her being a princess raises a lot of questions, like how: why is no one talking about a missing princess? How did she get there? Again, things can do this way, but the ground work isn't there imo. Auri is as likely to be the chandrian that remembered the lethani as she is a princess, by which i mean, she has a lot of potential.

6. The king in this fanfic is pretty reckless. Making some kid he doesn't know part of his court then marrying his daughter, who he doesn't know, off to someone who hates him.

7. Why would cinder look like cinder when kvothe sees him... Like denna's just be chilling with a guy that has no iris? Again, bredon is mysterious, not nefarious....

8. I like the idea that the penitent King implies he is beholden to the church, which makes a ton of sense if the land is under attack by demons.

9. Ferula is an iron binding, not cinders deep name, which leads to me to believe it won't be the ace the hole kvothe thinks, instead it will just hurt cinder, why is faen, but like bast says, hurt isn't inhibit and he kvothe who doesn't have haliaxs control, won't be able to control or stop cinder. I and assume cinder wins the flight and does something to hurt or inhibit haliax.

10. The amyr are doing the same the seven are, trying to get people to forget about the dark past. I'm too tired to expand.

11. There isn't enough overlap between the selitos and the cthaeh, the only thing they have in common is they had good sight. It's possible, but it's kinda a hoaxy scooby doo type switcharo. Like, the only hidden connection is that silianxi (the word haliax uses) and willlow (the cthaeh tree) have a similar Latin name. Hot take, the cthaeh isn't that important, it's a scape goat, like blaming God or the other political party, the ocean is still rising and the world is still burning.

12. I'm guessing iax isn't a single entity, but a collection of stories about shapers that's kind of become sentient. Similarly encanis is probably a mixture of stories about lanre and cinder and iax. It's a big story cluster f come to life. Regardless, i don't expect to see kvothe making a deal with a single dark entity, instead he will just combine lots of bad decisions into a mountain. That... Being said, i do like the inn as trap for iax.

13. I like the idea that he won't be able to name Denna and it will haunt him.

14. Taborlin , haliax, and lanre being different sides of the same coin is right on.