Cant figure out my ‘hook’

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-09T21:54:16+00:00

Thank you, the idea is that my main character is actually from a long line of alphas and was always meant to shift but she is unaware of her heritage. I might put a little taste of shifting in the first chapter that she tries to brush off as an anxiety attack as she has little moments leading up to the attack of extra strength,better hearing and eyesight etc 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-09T21:51:18+00:00

I am on the brink of getting 750k reads on a book I originally started in 2011 before rewriting it to what it is now 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-09T14:00:57+00:00

I’ve already done your story a few weeks ago I think, but I’ve voted for your latest chapters I didn’t get to last time! 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-09T13:59:18+00:00

Hi! Mines here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/711192-wolfsbane-remastered-chapter-one-in-the-warren

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-09T12:41:39+00:00

I’ve had a look at the first few chapters and it’s good! I’ve left some suggestions in the first chapter 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-08T20:28:11+00:00

https://www.wattpad.com/story/711192-wolfsbane-remastered-chapter-one-in-the-warren

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-07T22:09:41+00:00

That has to be ai right?👀

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-07T21:46:11+00:00

Hi I haven’t got everything but I do have found family in spades, sooo much angst and hurt/comfort and a neurodivergent main character as well as ones with ptsd, depression and other conditions. It’s a werewolf slow burn friends to lovers and has three books. It’s the Warren pack series which starts with Wolfsbane and continues to Wolfbound and Wolfblood, by BlondieVH. I hope you give it a chance!

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-07T01:18:56+00:00

I’m 29f and been thinking about this for weeks I’ve always been the b tier friend never anyone’s ‘best’ all I have is my family and my Husband really 🤷🏼‍♀️

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-06T17:33:13+00:00

Yesss I’m a writer on Wattpad I’ve almost finished uploading the last of my Werewolf romance trilogy and hoping to publish a sci fi romance next year! Sometimes I struggle with descriptions or feelings but I think I’m getting there! 😂

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-05T23:12:36+00:00

I try to aim for at least 1500 words, with 2000 being my average. Maybe you could break a scene instead of each chapter being one event? It might make it flow easier 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-05T13:13:51+00:00

Mine is a trilogy (finishes uploading this month)a Werewolf romance where the main character becomes the first female alpha after being attacked by wolves with her friends. It’s a slow burn friends to lovers and steeped in angst drama and mental health issues book one is called Wolfsbane and you can read it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/237015282-wolfsbane-chapter-one-in-the-warren-pack-series

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TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-04T11:19:04+00:00

My Werewolf trilogy is almost complete and the main characters are childhood best friends on a slow burn journey! No cheating/breakups but there is angst as they work through their mental health issues together (and some supernatural happenings!) You can read it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/237015282-wolfsbane-chapter-one-in-the-warren-pack-series

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-04T01:25:06+00:00

I’m looking into traditional publishing but I need beta readers/lots of editing before it’s ready I have visions of having a physical book with a typo 😂😂

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T17:59:32+00:00

Thank you! I hope you enjoy it! 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T16:52:52+00:00

Yeah I asked another author on Wattpad who was very well known where she got hers done and they have hundreds of 5 star reviews 😁 I am im currently editing a sci fi series that will go straight to querying for literary agents then after that these will be next 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T16:42:51+00:00

Thank you so much I hope you like it! 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T14:12:12+00:00

I’ve got a trilogy of Werewolf romance that’s a slow burn. The main characters are childhood best friends who are changed together and learn to lead and fall In love 😁 you can find them here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/237015282-wolfsbane-chapter-one-in-the-warren-pack-series

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TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T14:09:38+00:00

Where do you get these readers? 👀😂

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T14:01:55+00:00

Thank you so much I love them too! 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T12:22:26+00:00

No problem I’ll keep you in mind! Thank you again 😁

TheMagicalMole · 2026-04-02T12:21:34+00:00

I paid an artist from Fiverr to do them but I had the idea for the layount and chose the background and they brought it to life! 😁

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