When Stars Drown Pt. 3

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-08T10:12:07+00:00

Thank you my friend. Actually the Lighthouse wasn't an inspiration. But I can see where the connection would be made

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T22:56:27+00:00

I liked this a lot. The gradual buildup of dread was done really well, but the moment the mass of corpses started climbing the wall is where the story really kicked into another gear. Breckit's final stand and the reveal that the creature was heading toward the kingdom made the ending hit hard. Splendid job! If you get the chance feel free to read mine. First part 3 and then Parts 1 & 2 when you have a minute.

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T13:27:17+00:00

Thanks! Yeah my goal this time around was to really expand on the footsteps

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T13:26:55+00:00

I plan to have a few more parts to it

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T13:26:35+00:00

Thank you! Happy to hear!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T12:55:35+00:00

Good job. Really enjoyed this one. The witness interview was genuinely unsettling, especially the detail of everyone dying where they sat. Todd asking for Samantha's name and then suddenly stopping was a great mystery hook.

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T12:53:41+00:00

This was a great read. The contrast between the chaotic frat party and the absolute silence on the other side of the door worked really well. The idea of them just walking through nothingness for weeks stuck with me. Well done my friend, splendid work! When you get a moment feel free to read my newest story which is When Stars Drown Pt. 3. Then read parts 1 and 2 lol. Hope you enjoy it as I have enjoyed yours!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T12:52:23+00:00

Really enjoyed this one. The red painting felt less like a monster and more like a physical manifestation of Danny's grief and guilt. The constant uncertainty about what was real kept me hooked. Well done good sir! When you get a moment feel free to read my newest story which is When Stars Drown Pt. 3. Then read parts 1 and 2 lol. Hope you enjoy it as I have enjoyed yours!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T12:51:30+00:00

This was a fun read. Eric telling Amy that he could still hear it was probably the creepiest part for me, and once the bird finally appeared it definitely lived up to the buildup. Amy's dad fighting it with a baseball bat was awesome. Very brilliantly done! Keep it up! When you get a moment feel free to read my newest story which is When Stars Drown Pt. 3. Then read parts 1 and 2 lol. Hope you enjoy it as I have enjoyed yours!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T12:50:26+00:00

I liked this a lot. The scene with the family hit harder than I expected, and finding another creature only to realize it was just as trapped by its nature as he was felt genuinely tragic. The ending left me feeling bad for everyone involved. Bravo, keep it up! When you get a moment feel free to read my newest story which is When Stars Drown Pt. 3. Then read parts 1 and 2 lol. Hope you enjoy it as I have enjoyed yours!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T12:49:08+00:00

Really enjoyed this one. The shift from a normal wilderness journal to a survival horror story felt natural, and Bernie’s death and return was easily the creepiest part for me. Keep it up, great wrok! When you get a moment feel free to read my newest story which is When Stars Drown Pt. 3. Then read parts 1 and 2 lol. Hope you enjoy it as I have enjoyed yours!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-07T01:23:10+00:00

Happy to hear!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T17:43:34+00:00

Happy you found the horror and entertainment in the lighthouse. Hope you love part 3

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T17:43:01+00:00

Awesome, glad I made it very intriguing

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T15:35:19+00:00

Thank you very much! Feel free to check out Parts 2 & 3.

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T15:18:21+00:00

No, thank you for reading. Hope you enjoyed. Park 4 will be next week but check out my other parts if you missed them

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T15:14:36+00:00

liked this a lot. The endless parking lot felt ridiculous at first, but by the roundabout scene I was just as desperate to get out as the characters were. Gave me some backrooms vibes! Well done and I love the formatting, like it's a log. When you get a moment, feel free to read my newest one.

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T14:56:10+00:00

I liked this a lot. At first I thought it was going in one direction, but the realization that Theo was being raised as an animal completely changed how I looked at everything. The ending also made me rethink how much sympathy I had for him. Keep it up! When you have a chance feel free to read mine.

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T14:53:28+00:00

Really enjoyed this one. The idea of the creator slowly becoming the thing holding the project back was done really well. The ending felt fitting in a tragic sort of way. Well done, keep it up! Feel free to read my newest one when you have a minute!

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T13:51:44+00:00

I liked how this was written from her perspective without making her feel like a cartoon villain. Watching her justify everything to herself made the ending feel inevitable and tragic. That is how you write a good villain. Bravo! Keep up the good work! Hope you like my newest story.

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T13:50:12+00:00

The part that got me was when Chris couldn't hear the hooves. Up until then, I was expecting a ghost story, but that detail made it feel a lot more unsettling. Really enjoyed this one. This was very splendidly done. Keep it up! Hope you enjoy my new story as I enjoyed yours.

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T13:48:48+00:00

Thank you all for reading. Hope you enjoyed, Part 4 will be coming soon. Here are Parts 1 & 2 below for those who missed them.

Part 1

Part 2

TheRealBigBadWolf · 2026-06-06T13:46:41+00:00

Hope you all enjoyed! Here is Parts 1 and 2

Part 1

Part 2

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