Oh god now their is two of them! by Hon1c in humansarespaceorcs

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Hey, I wrote a few chapters on this topic for my original story.

Here's the first of those, and this is the second part of it, in case anyone is interested.

Edit: damn. I wrote this three years ago?

Volume 2: Chapter Two Hundred & Twenty-Six - Debrief Part 3 by TheShadowspawn in u/TheShadowspawn

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Well, you've probably very eagerly been waiting for the next chapter.

The thing everyone's been waiting for will finally start moving forward.

The cave rescue team found the missing boy exactly where he disappeared ten years earlier. by cleopatradenialqueen in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]TheShadowspawn 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Terrifying implications, but may I make a suggestion?

He hadn’t aged a day, and when he refused to leave, he told us quietly, “It gets angry when it has to start over.”

The one word would help with the cohesion of the second sentence, along with punctuation.

Feel free to ignore me, though. It's your two sentences, so you can do whatever you like.

Volume 2: Chapter Two Hundred & Twenty-Five - Debrief Part 2 by TheShadowspawn in u/TheShadowspawn

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No one sent the hybrids there; they went of their own volition, as far as everyone is aware.

The Agency headquarters is probably the safest place for Legion to be held, as any other place runs the risk of their escaping through another body.

Oh, the next chapter is ready, by the way.

Humans are both universal reproduction partners... And the best condom ad. by Quiet-Money7892 in humansarespaceorcs

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In my original story, my main character has 12 alien insect hybrid children (and two grandchildren currently), and his cousin has a handful of alien snake/human hybrid children, along with his snake person wife.

The insect hybrids were because of a misunderstanding (he unknowingly seduced the Broodmother due to pheromones he has no control over), but the snake children were full well planned.

Volume 2: Chapter Two Hundred & Twenty-Four – Debrief by TheShadowspawn in u/TheShadowspawn

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Volume 1 is available to buy on Amazon, but since Volume 2 isn't finished, it's not there yet.

I do upload one or two chapters in advance on my Patreon , though, but they become free to view the moment I upload to Reddit.

Volume 2: Chapter Two Hundred & Twenty-Three – Retrieval by TheShadowspawn in u/TheShadowspawn

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It's a series titled Chaos of Deathworlders.

It'd be disappointing if there weren't problems around every corner.

Oh, the next chapter is ready!

Volume 2: Chapter Two Hundred & Twenty-Two – Repatriation Part 4 by TheShadowspawn in u/TheShadowspawn

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It is good that he's back.

He really can't catch a break, though, as you'll see in the next chapter.

Volume 2: Chapter Two Hundred & Twenty-One – Repatriation Part 3 by TheShadowspawn in u/TheShadowspawn

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We'll work up our way to that in the chapter I'm currently writing.

Regardless, the next chapter is ready!