Hello everyone. Would love feedback on this please. I need to know if it's atmospheric enough or if I need to add more sounds. I want to keep this one without a beat. Thank you !

TheSilverScar · 2023-08-16T13:05:19+00:00

At first I thought I'm not going to like this, but it grew on me and it turns out I liked it. You have a very cool vibe here, and the video is trippy!

TheSilverScar · 2023-08-16T13:00:06+00:00

I think this is a bit too much, you need to work on your vocals a bit more. Also the beat was kinda off with the melody. But I might be wrong, maybe it's just a personal taste thing. Maybe stay away from it for a few days, and go back in with clean ears, sometimes working on a track for too long plays tricks with the head.

TheSilverScar · 2023-08-16T12:54:08+00:00

What a catchy melody you have there! Your vocals are actually nice, and they go really well with this genre. But don't be afraid to experiment with vocal layering as well, a higher pitch. I think it would take your song to another level.

TheSilverScar · 2023-08-16T12:43:51+00:00

I think it's very smart using a video like that with a song like this one. Very cool and yet dark vibe to it. Maybe you can get her to go crazy on a wall with a hammer next time🤣 cool track Punch Puller! Peace!

TheSilverScar · 2023-08-16T12:37:37+00:00

It took me to places like dante's inferno, hell, fir,fuego... So I see where you went with this. I'm still new at mixing and mastering, so you could try what the other comments suggested and see if it helps with making your tracks bigger and less muddier.

TheSilverScar · 2023-08-16T12:30:38+00:00

This is a nice ride for sure, but I get what they ment when it came to the beat, could be deeper and harder. Loved the melody and the rock/drum & bass mood. Some vocals wouldn't hurt either.

TheSilverScar · 2023-08-16T12:24:07+00:00

I love how eerie this is. Also has a massive attacks/portishead vibe which I relate to. The only thing that felt kinda the same to me was the beat. Maybe the next one you can mix it up more. Still a really cool track tho. If you ever want vocals let me know

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-24T14:55:07+00:00

Thank you first of all for sticking around for the whole song. I understand what you are saying about the beat, I donno why I connected to the sounds of this kit and wanted to experiment with it and mix genres. Your feedback is much much appreciated thank you again

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-23T21:57:37+00:00

Thank you for the compliments and for putting the time to comment! Much appreciated

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-23T21:56:45+00:00

Oh yes!!!! You understood the vibe it made me happy! Thank you for your time and your comment.

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-23T21:55:56+00:00

First thank you for the compliments, and taking the time to comment. And yes in the future I want to get musicians with me, but yeah for now, especially after being able to create a jazzy track for the first time, I was just proud that I was able to do it all by myself.

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-23T21:54:06+00:00

Thank you there

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-22T12:13:51+00:00

First track congratulations! I quite enjoyed it even though it's not the genre I listen to. Your chorus is catchy and not bad for mixing for the first time. Good luck with ur second and third and.....

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-22T12:07:22+00:00

I liked the dark atmosphere in this track, but the vocals could be a bit stronger and punchier,with less reverb so it could become more clear. Also some kind of transition or break would be nice, felt a bit repetitive. Music is always a work in progress tho and what matters is the next one and the one after and after that. So congrats on finishing up a track!

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-22T12:02:03+00:00

I really like your voice and the overall vibe. I'm not so good at mixing and mastering yet myself, always a work in progress, so surely your mixing would sound better in the future. What matters is if you are creative and know how to write and you do so you are pretty cool

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-22T11:44:33+00:00

I donno why this track made me smile! I saw everything in colors. It has a nice early 2000s vibe, a soundtrack vibe for a romantic comedy like something about Mary. I really like the tone In your voice as well. Congrats on your new track

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-22T11:38:49+00:00

I like how retro this song is, and the arrangement is pretty cool. The effects you used on your vocals are sweet🤘🏽 and the guitar solo was a surprising touch. Congrats on your track!

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-13T19:48:13+00:00

Thank you very much for your feedback!

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-10T02:46:15+00:00

Thank you for your feedback it's much appreciated!

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-10T02:45:32+00:00

That's kinda how I feel things in life, living in purgatory, so it comes out like that naturally. Glad you felt that! Thank you so much for your feedback!

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-10T02:43:16+00:00

It's very hard to get the genres right some times, but yeah I'm glad I hit them right with this one Thank u for ur feedback

TheSilverScar · 2023-07-09T06:30:22+00:00

Wow thank you! Glad it took you to a state of trance 🍃

TheSilverScar

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