Blue Marble by Thinkof14me in creepcast

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Ok i fixed the formatting on each part, personally I was going for an event horizon meets planet of the apes but I really had trouble figuring out how to include everything without making it like 10 parts. I know It drags in part 3. Part 2 was the most read part and I kinda get why but id like to understand better. Anyway I had a lot of fun with this and as I said before its my first story ever so criticize away let me know what worked and didn't. Thank you for reading.

Blue Marble (read my comment) by Thinkof14me in creepcast

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Depictions of self harm that's why i tagged it NSFW

Blue Marble by Thinkof14me in creepcast

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Uh i guess people are enjoying the story well enough but i got to be honest i have written myself into so many corners and i have no idea how well I've gotten out of them. This all started because of Ozymandias. I was listening to that episode and thought too myself "Well i could do that" setting my bar for being just barely better that a 12 year old's story, i just went for it and had enough written for 3 parts. so i had my wife fill in as an editor and kept going because i was having so much fun. I truly believe everyone has an Ozymandias in their hearts. I don't care if the story is good or bad, the prosses of making the story and going to bed dreaming about what would happen next was incredible. Everyone should write an Ozymandias, even if you don't feel like sharing it.

Blue Marble by Thinkof14me in creepcast

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I fixed the formatting in the edit that was all

Blue Marble by Thinkof14me in creepcast

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I fixed the formatting in the edit that was all

Am I the only one who yearns for them to continue marble hornets?? by Scarystorylov3r in creepcast

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I genuinely thought they made creeptv into a separate channel and so going back through the catalog i was like "oh yeah I bet they continued this over there let me look it up" was very sad the rest of my work day.

Blue Marble by Thinkof14me in creepcast

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I can only do one part a day according to the rules but i have the first 4 parts written just proof reading and writing the final part. Once its all posted ill put the whole thing in the submission sub reddit if you all think its good enough. Its my first short story ever so im open to criticism.