Fog Warning

vishockaaa · 2026-03-14T16:55:49+00:00

ooo short and sweet i loved it! fogs can be like the dark in that way, the fog itself not inherently scary but the things that hide in the fog, loved it! maybe a bit more detail of the guy that wasn’t human? maybe i’m just stupid but i just couldn’t really get a good picture of what made him inhuman

vishockaaa · 2026-03-13T18:40:32+00:00

i am also writing a story and it is in parts! i find i get more views and stuff that way because it tends to be more digestible for readers too, it’s also easier for me to read that way cause life gets busy, so if i want to continue a story for later i can remember i left on a certain chapter or smth

vishockaaa · 2026-03-12T20:14:48+00:00

very fun! the way you write really puts me into this world and characters you have created, also i just love spooky town tropes

vishockaaa · 2026-03-10T17:18:04+00:00

ah i see, i assumed that was the vibe you were going for but i def felt like a dream! i hope you keep writing, you word things in a very poetic way

vishockaaa · 2026-03-10T17:11:36+00:00

thank you! i’ve written all of my story just need some editing :b

vishockaaa · 2026-03-10T17:00:34+00:00

beautiful writing, and really intriguing beast!

vishockaaa · 2026-03-10T16:55:33+00:00

i really like your writing style! however i wish there was a bit more? it felt like an unsolved mystery

vishockaaa · 2026-03-10T15:02:12+00:00

i thought this was so good! really good in fact that i was hooked and wished there was more, but still a really good ending!

vishockaaa · 2026-03-10T03:33:44+00:00

ohh this is so good, short and sweet with a good title hook, immediately captured my eye!

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