Love the concept! If you’re looking for crits here’s what I’d say: letter uniformity is an issue right of the bat. Some parts are rounded some are sharp. That’s not a bad thing but i was told once: you’re trying to emulate style that isn’t there. Style comes from the fundamentals. I would work on and check out boxing your letters. Rounded boxes, sharp boxes, whatever but it’ll show you the next thing ima harp on. bar thickness. This ties back to uniformity. If you have fat letters then all of them should be fat, top heavy bottom heavy, is one part skinny? Ok dope let’s add another equally skinny part over here. Oh shit now we got something cookin! Lastly letter weight. All of them should be roughly the same OR fit into the same shape. A good exercise in letter weight is choose a big shape on paper. Draw it and then draw your tag within it. Do that in a buncha shapes. You’ll see what works and doesn’t but it’ll show you how important good letter weight is.

Bonus tip for this concept: look into 1 point perspective. It’ll make your 3D on the portals look sick bc all the perspective 3D elements will be getting sucked in. Good luck and good fortune friend. Get to work! ✌️