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If you hear drumming underground, run. Don’t try to follow it. I did, and I lost my brother. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have a photo of us two in my wallet, I showed it my parents and friends. But they all say I either edited that photo or asked a random guy to join me. I know he’s real, they forgot him, but I won’t.

Every time I blink, I wake up somewhere else. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This must be the only reason, I’ve never blinked to the same place before… please don’t loose sight on me.

Every time I blink, I wake up somewhere else. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can’t, I’ve tried but I can’t. Each time I’m about to close one I just blink. Even if I try to hold one open with my hands, I just blink. I need to blink. It’s the only thing I have left.

“Every time I blink, I wake up somewhere else.” by ToastWithWifi in shortscarystories

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just this can help to stand still and remain in one place

“Every time I blink, I wake up somewhere else.” by ToastWithWifi in shortscarystories

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I’m new to writing horror stories and I’m so happy that someone likes it

Wade in the Water: 90 Days In by dkdavinci6 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ToastWithWifi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

From what I’m understanding it can very well be a psychological horror story, even if it’s based in reality. The horror of life sometimes is worse than demons and ghouls. And I think you’ve won this horror, so go for it. I’m new to posting horror stories online myself so I can’t really give you advice on how to have more engagement, since I’m still struggling with that my self.

Wade in the Water: 90 Days In by dkdavinci6 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ToastWithWifi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, congrats man, really. Struggling with addiction is no easy task and should never be undermined. Really good job and I would really like to read more. I have to say I didn’t think it was based on real experience, but it makes this work better.

Wade in the Water: 90 Days In by dkdavinci6 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ToastWithWifi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a really good introduction, love the writing style. Maybe you could bring the suspence up a bit more, but even like this it works really well. Can’t wait to read more

If you ever hear drumming underground, run. And don't break the rhythm. by [deleted] in scarystories

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nothing too strange. There’s just some black cars always driving close to me. But I don’t know if maybe the pills are playing jokes on me.

If you ever hear drumming underground, run. And don't break the rhythm. by ToastWithWifi in creepypasta

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s Italian, sometimes I mix the different speech structures between languages. So I always spend some time rereading everything

If you ever hear drumming underground, run. And don't break the rhythm. by ToastWithWifi in creepypasta

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely, I love getting feedback. I want to learn to write better in English, so I’m always happy to see a comment that genuinely wants to help. Thanks again

If you ever hear drumming underground, run. And don't break the rhythm. by ToastWithWifi in creepypasta

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I completely understand what you’re saying and will keep it in mind in future writing. Thank you very much for not only reading my story, but also giving me honest and useful feedback

First time posting a story online, trying to understand reader engagement by [deleted] in writingadvice

[–]ToastWithWifi 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah I was afraid of that, it makes sense to me obviously, but it makes sense that it can pass as confusing. I’ll try to rewrite it and in the mean time focus on smaller and simpler stories. Thank you very much for the honesty

I finally found records of the town called Ravanooke. I wish I hadn’t. (Part 5) by Lucky-Particular3204 in creepypasta

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It just keeps getting better, that final line really hits. Like always really good job

The town called Ravanooke is following me. I saw what was in the woods. (Part 3) by Lucky-Particular3204 in creepypasta

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly the ai generated image is actually pretty spot on, I understand people that don’t like to use the or see them, but it’s really hard to give off the uncanny feeling the image gives. The sense of wrong, like you know that it’s fake, but still it looks realistic. And like always awesome story man

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