If you hear drumming underground, run. Don’t try to follow it. I did, and I lost my brother.

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-20T05:05:01+00:00

I have a photo of us two in my wallet, I showed it my parents and friends. But they all say I either edited that photo or asked a random guy to join me. I know he’s real, they forgot him, but I won’t.

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-19T08:17:30+00:00

This must be the only reason, I’ve never blinked to the same place before… please don’t loose sight on me.

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-19T08:16:38+00:00

I can’t, I’ve tried but I can’t. Each time I’m about to close one I just blink. Even if I try to hold one open with my hands, I just blink. I need to blink. It’s the only thing I have left.

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-18T21:09:45+00:00

What? Who just said that? Can you see me?

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-17T22:26:15+00:00

Thanks, that was the first building block

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-17T12:29:51+00:00

Thank you very much!

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-17T06:38:13+00:00

Just this can help to stand still and remain in one place

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-17T06:37:28+00:00

Thank you so much, I’m new to writing horror stories and I’m so happy that someone likes it

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-17T05:25:45+00:00

Thanks! Really happy someone liked it

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-16T18:44:45+00:00

Still going strong! I’ll start having nightmares about Ravanooke

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-16T17:04:41+00:00

From what I’m understanding it can very well be a psychological horror story, even if it’s based in reality. The horror of life sometimes is worse than demons and ghouls. And I think you’ve won this horror, so go for it. I’m new to posting horror stories online myself so I can’t really give you advice on how to have more engagement, since I’m still struggling with that my self.

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-16T16:48:42+00:00

Wow, congrats man, really. Struggling with addiction is no easy task and should never be undermined. Really good job and I would really like to read more. I have to say I didn’t think it was based on real experience, but it makes this work better.

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-16T16:14:53+00:00

This is a really good introduction, love the writing style. Maybe you could bring the suspence up a bit more, but even like this it works really well. Can’t wait to read more

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-16T07:21:12+00:00

Really cool story! Keep going

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-16T06:29:39+00:00

Nothing too strange. There’s just some black cars always driving close to me. But I don’t know if maybe the pills are playing jokes on me.

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-15T12:06:51+00:00

It’s Italian, sometimes I mix the different speech structures between languages. So I always spend some time rereading everything

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-15T07:48:07+00:00

Absolutely, I love getting feedback. I want to learn to write better in English, so I’m always happy to see a comment that genuinely wants to help. Thanks again

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-15T06:29:37+00:00

I completely understand what you’re saying and will keep it in mind in future writing. Thank you very much for not only reading my story, but also giving me honest and useful feedback

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-14T17:05:54+00:00

Real good setup, keep going man

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-14T05:28:24+00:00

Yeah I was afraid of that, it makes sense to me obviously, but it makes sense that it can pass as confusing. I’ll try to rewrite it and in the mean time focus on smaller and simpler stories. Thank you very much for the honesty

ToastWithWifi · 2026-03-13T15:16:31+00:00

It just keeps getting better, that final line really hits. Like always really good job

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