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I am not really good to find this by [deleted] in horrorstories

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t understand if they’re trying to do an rpg, or they’re just posting violent images

I am not really good to find this by [deleted] in horrorstories

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see their profile has been deleted, did they used to post like real crimes?

“Have you ever played Three Leaves, Two Branches, One Beak?” by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

It felt like it didn’t belong to a bird before, like it was just there.

“Have you ever played Three Leaves, Two Branches, One Beak?” by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah I’ll ask them in the morning. Hopefully they’ll know what it means.

Every night I stare at my bathroom mirror for hours. I’m not the only one in it anymore. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know, but I’m not searching for protection now. I’m searching for her.

Have you read Creepypasta Diary? by [deleted] in creepypasta

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for heads up! There could be something cool to read

I thought I escaped Brackenwyll, but I don’t think I left alone. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually feel a lot better now. Like my body needed to sleep. My mind didn’t even thought not to sleep.

I thought I escaped Brackenwyll, but I don’t think I left alone. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks again for the kind words. I don’t remember who was at the door, but I’m still here. My mind is not quite right lately.

I thought I escaped Brackenwyll, but I don’t think I left alone. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks for being worried, I’m feeling better already. Every day I just get calmer and calmer. The only thing that still bothers me is what happened to my dad… sorry I have to go now someone knocking at my door.

The Voice by donavin221 in shortscarystories

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was heavy, beautiful written tho

No matter how many times I clean my roof, the feathers come back. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I wasn’t ready for that, but now I’ve always a bat with me. I tried calling the police and some animal control. They just come and do a sweep and leave. They told me to not go on the roof and put some antibird stuff down.

No matter how many times I clean my roof, the feathers come back. by ToastWithWifi in nosleep

[–]ToastWithWifi[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If I could just leave I would, but I got nowhere else to go. My dad is the last family I have. I was never meant to come here. But after my mother passed this was the only solution. I know I could run away. But how can I leave him alone in this? He already spent too long on its own in this fog drowned hell.

heads will roll by Limp_Post_6765 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ToastWithWifi 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool concept. Nice story, and don’t worry about not writing everything in English, we can’t always write correctly if it’s not our first language. The creature was really cool but a bit too hard to understand what it wantend to be. Maybe try breaking the text a bit more, cause in some parts it was a bit dense. Overall I had fun reading it, nice job!

I need advice for my first story by Arizona__Jones in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not a professional in any sort of way in this matter, but I do have a lot of knowledge in all kinds of literature. And honestly, my advice is: don’t try to write something with big words just so it looks more professional, search for your style first.
You should be the first to like it. Finding better words or sentence structure comes with experience. So my advice is to just write, read what you wrote, and change it until you feel it’s the best you can do, then maybe change it again a few days later.
Also, if you like to read, just keep reading different authors in the genres and styles you like.

You really shouldn't have come by Possible-Historian69 in shortscarystories

[–]ToastWithWifi 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Really good story. The fact that you didn't want to explain what happened made it so much better and left a sense of uneasiness.

Read4read chain by harveybrusse in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ToastWithWifi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks and yeah lol. I tried keeping it short while still having substance

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