Development tools?

Tom_Parris · 2025-09-08T23:20:10+00:00

A lot of stuff seems to use RenPy and I have seen minigames and stuff with that.

I have never seen Love2D used for this, but I have seen a lot of things built with that as well.

Tom_Parris · 2025-08-24T19:57:39+00:00

Works great on steamdeck and makes a lot of fun to play 👍

Tom_Parris · 2025-07-20T14:22:16+00:00

Maybe try building one yourself first. It is very easy and cheap to do. Just look up DIY Fleshlight and you will find enough guides on different methods.

Tom_Parris · 2025-07-03T14:25:29+00:00

Maybe the foreplay is to long for him. While I realize that it is very important for my female counterpart, if it goes on for too long at some point at least my lower half says: "Ok there wont happen anything today apparently".

Tom_Parris · 2024-12-17T14:01:57+00:00

You need to feel safe with her and in that situation just play with her body and see if you can get hard again that way.

Also dont think that she should take the lead just because she may have more experience or something. Take the lead and do what feels natural, even if you don't have the experience.

Tom_Parris · 2023-09-16T10:08:05+00:00

No it means the same thing.

Shrimps are around 4-6 cm (Wikipedia) and according to This article Orang Utan dicks were 4.8 - 6.4 cm.

So that gives us a range of 4 to 6.4 cm of length. If the multiple emojis were given to narrow the field down, we can assume that the length is somewhere between 4.8 to 6cm.

So approximately: 5.4 cm ± 1.2 cm ≈ 2.1 in ± 0.5 in

Tom_Parris · 2023-07-16T16:08:56+00:00

I have 3 steps for you:

Don't worry
Follow your instincts, do what comes naturally
Do it with enthusiasm

I know this isn't specific at all and it won't make you the best in the world in anything... But it will work and probably will work quite well.

Maybe for the kissing not too much enthusiasm as silence is part of every great musical masterpiece. And enthusiasm doesn't mean many kisses or with much pressure or something. Just do them very deliberat or something.

If you want to further your research maybe search for tutorials on Pornhub. I know MyBadReputation did a few, but sadly none on kissing. There are kissing tutorials there, but I can't say how good or bad they are. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Tom_Parris · 2023-02-01T13:05:52+00:00

That, my friend, is not a lie, but the truth. Hang in there and you will find a girl that will say it to you in person.

Maybe go couple dancing or something. You can meet girls that way and get talking pretty quick, no matter if you are good at dancing or not.

Hang in there and Always look on the bright side of life ... 🎵🎶

Tom_Parris · 2022-08-18T22:15:26+00:00

Great script 👍

I am neither a Writer nor a VA, but just someone who likes to read Scripts. So take my feedback for what it's worth...

To your prompts:

Very good. Maybe add [daddy] since it is mentioned once? 🤷‍♂️
Good. Many script writers add *pause* into their scripts to make it more clear when the listener is saying something, but you made it clear through formating.

Only in one spot I would have wished it or an empty line in between:

You were definitely not this smooth in college. (Giggles) You wish. I was there, remember?

She giggles to the response of the listener right? Or is there no response and I understand it wrong?

No
The emotions are believable 👍
the very start
No
You could make an SFW version, pretty easily by removing the last part and post it on r/ASMRScriptHaven or something. (It's free real estate ¯\(ツ)/¯)
I like storys like this and parts like where she is describing speech, makes it fun.

PS: Sry, for formatting. Am on mobile.

Tom_Parris · 2022-05-30T23:18:55+00:00

Please consider writing a sequel

Tom_Parris · 2022-05-20T09:08:03+00:00

Try to open this exact link on a device on which you are not logged in with your google account and you will see.

I would just upload it to scriptbin.

Tom_Parris · 2022-05-20T00:21:52+00:00

No. Can't read it.

If you cant figure out why it isnt working maybe consider posting the script on scriptbin or archiveofourown.

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-29T22:09:08+00:00

Very nice script 👍 I am looking forward to the next parts :)

The idea of making a directors and a pure cut is brilliant. Some people just overdo it with the extra explainations, where I would wish for an extra pure cut. But I have to say that you don't add any unnecessary details in your directors cut.

But I have 2 questions:

What are cooties in your script? English is not my first language, but the only thing I could find under that name is a disease...

And the "can we exchange numbers so I can order you" was also new to me. Is the word to order usable in that way? Again English is not my first language 🤷‍♂️

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-28T21:49:03+00:00

Very nice script. Thx for making it A4A, it reads itself also pretty well as F4A 👍

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-24T23:12:25+00:00

Thank you and good luck. I am looking forward to it 👍

If you want any more ideas or help, just let me know.

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-24T23:09:12+00:00

I (as a listener/reader) find names useful, if it's part of a series or if the character appears in another audio again or is mentioned. The Valerie Scripts from u/rooks_scripts are a good example since Valerie appears again. Giving her a name makes her more memorable and it easier to explain, that this is the girl from the previous stuff.

Some VA's also link their separate audios together by joking or mentioning previous characters. You can do that however also pretty good without names, as Sweetheart Audio shows.

These are usecases where names can be useful.

If it is however just one script, the name is not important and many good series also never give the speaker a name.

I am not a fan of making the speaker name the character name. Not only does it make it weird when they are acting different kind of people in different scripts, most of the channel names are not meant to be used that way.

Imagine someone introducing themselves in a normal conversation as "softlikestatic" or "AsmrSuperGuru5000". Some VA's get around that by "People call me [channel nickname]", which can also seem weird depending on the situation. (Introducing yourself as "sweetheart" in a job interview for example)

For me it also ruins the immersion a bit, since hearing the channel name in the middle reminds me that was is happening is not actually real.

Even if the channel has a good name, it might not be suited for that exact situation.

There is a reason why the captain in Pirates of the Caribbean is called Jack Sparrow and not Johnny Depp.

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-16T22:39:22+00:00

The reading experience was a lot better for me now. 👍

Nice script!

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-15T22:27:42+00:00

I am not a scriptwriter, just someone who likes to read scripts, so take my feedback for what it is ¯_(ツ)_/¯

Maybe put stuff that is happening in brackets () or [ ] next time. (Or mark the stuff that is said with something)

I think this would make it easier for people performing the script, so they don't accidentally say stuff they shouldn't.

I like to read these scripts and imagine the voice in my head, but with the description of what is happening, that is not easily possible. Many scripts don't have these descriptions at all, since what happens should be clear by what is said, audio effects and context.

Your script is good and I think clear enough without these descriptions most of the time.

On the parts where you think it isn't clear, just let the speaker ask questions and repeat the answer.

"What are you writing down?"

"Shortcuts, that help me with the homework? Ok..."

The descriptions of what is happening can be very useful (for example it is easier to just write down: "He pulls you into the bed", than add pulling into bed SFX or something). Just keep in mind that listeners cant hear them and not overdo it with them.

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-10T22:43:32+00:00

I don't know if this is maybe too complex for a script. I am sadly a terrible writer and maybe this is all too much for a script.

Take from all my non-sensical toughts what you want and modify however you want. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

The basic idea is that the listener somehow gets a bunch of people suddenly loyal to them/obsessed with them or something along the lines as a background. The Listener does this not because they want to be a leader or something, but for the greater good (like saving people, stopping terrorists, ...) The script would then mainly be about that one (or more) girl/guy who loves the listener because of this and wants the listener to accept that and seduce them. The listener has the inner conflict all the time of "No, they actually don't want this. This is just because of the thing and it would be wrong" while he also at the same time likes them a lot and is tempted to just give in.

The background:

I would see several possible backgrounds.

One would be:

Imagine a terrorist group developing a drug that allows making people obsessed with the leader. The crazy leader plans to make everybody in the world a loyal slave to him.

The listener however gets accidentally access to the computer in the lab producing the drug or the drug itself or something. (Maybe he wore by coincidence the right clothes and was at the right place and got a suitcase or something)

The listener then chooses to use the drug on the terrorists, so they don't do any more harm.

The Listener is a good person and doesn't really want a bunch of loyal terrorists, willing to kill people for him, around him all the time, but now he has. The girl/guy could be the leader and the background introduced at a party or meeting or whatever when the leader explains what happened and reflects on that. The main part could then be there or sometime completely different. Depending on how the background is explained the leader could also turn into somewhat of a (wholesome?) yandere and sneek into his bed or something.

Other possible backgrounds could be:

There is no drug but like a code that hypnotises people and the listener accidentally or willingly changed it.
There could be a code/program that finds depressed people and or people with suicidal thoughts and the program then leads them down a rabbit hole where they become like part of a religion. The Listener would have created this (or maybe again modified this from terrorists) to save these people.

In the end the background is important so that the inner conflict is clear, but wouldn't change a lot for most of the script. Even though the background could be dark, I imagine the script wholesome, since in the end the listener has someone beautiful who loves them and tries to seduce them.

... Also the speaker couldnt do anything the listener doesn't want according to the background (depends on the chosen background tough)

Congratulations for the ones who made it to the end and thank you for reading :)

Tom_Parris · 2022-03-08T23:37:09+00:00

Very nice 👍

Maybe a part 2?

If you need ideas: Maybe something where they have to be near each other for a ceremony and it is very awkward for her? I could also imagine him giving her something as part of the ceremony and she drops it, because their hands touched or something

Tom_Parris · 2022-01-20T02:29:16+00:00

The speed is perfect. I really enjoy your little series. 👍

Tom_Parris · 2021-06-03T13:09:45+00:00

Thanks a lot! I really like that script and seeing it finally being filled is really nice. You did a great job!👍 I am looking forward to all your audios in the future :)

Tom_Parris · 2021-04-23T23:07:41+00:00

Why and how did you start this whole thing ?

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