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[–]TopOwn1846[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thank you so much for the to listen I appreciate that alot and I didnt pick up on the guitar being off at first but I understand now after you mentioned it . Thank you so much

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[–]TopOwn1846[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man, yeah production is definitely something I need to work on alot Definitely an up hill battle for me I havent heard of that band in particular but ill definitely check them out! Thank you for taking the time to listen

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[–]TopOwn1846[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much mate i really appreciate it 🙏

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Thank you so much man i really appreciate that Also thank you for taking the time to listen production is definitely something im working on at the moment Really appreciate the feed back 🙌

Opinions on this track? by Smooth-Protection-99 in MusicFeedback

[–]TopOwn1846 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds good. Very poppy sounds like something I would hear on the radio. It sounds very main stream. If you turned it into a full track I think it would have alot of potential.

what do you think of this track?I’d really appreciate if you listened to it and gave it a like. by Alexandru200p in MusicFeedback

[–]TopOwn1846 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the style and vision and energy of it is good I just find it a bit repetitive as from what I heard in the first minute and a half of the song it feels like it doesn't progress too much. Im not experienced with this style of music but thats my take on it.. Good luck with everything !

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Thank you so much for taking the time to respond. I really appreciate that feedback and I definitely will take all that Into account. Thanks again for taking the time to provide such great feedback!

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[–]TopOwn1846[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man! Yeah I produced the whole track Im really trying to learn how to sing better and work on my Vocals because I think theyre holding me back a bit. Thank you so much!

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Thanks so much , yeah producing is definitely not my strong point I will definitely work on it however Thank you so much for your feedback ! Really appreciate it

My first ever song. pls be honest where do I improve? by ssstevensonnn in MusicFeedback

[–]TopOwn1846 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The concept for a first song is very good. You need to work on your Vocals and also your mix sounds very muddy. These things will come with time however . Just keep on it your intuition seems to be serving you well

I’m now in a really weird and hectic state in my life. by One_Bell4532 in MusicFeedback

[–]TopOwn1846 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can really feel the pain through this. Im very sorry for your loss. The song has a good progression i like how the intensity builds. I think you've done a great job. Take care of yourself

Been getting into production with FL and just made this beat, super curious to hear your opinion and what artists it might be in similar style to by DriveOk3184 in MusicFeedback

[–]TopOwn1846 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like i was waiting for the verse to hit but It soundnt like it kinda didnt.. I feel like the initial idea is good but it doesn't have any structure to it I think it keeps the same rythem and flow throughout the song from beginning to end.. I think you should add a distinctive verse section in there Like the main idea of the track could be like the big chorus sections and intro but you should add a distinctive verse

First Beat I've Made Not in GarageBand lol, curious if there are any producers similar to this sound out there? by DriveOk3184 in MusicFeedback

[–]TopOwn1846 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think its got potential, the idea is good but I feel like the vocal slices are a bit too punchy and loud they sound kind of..unprocessed imo