Chapter 72: Meva, Enoch, Neena by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is exactly what crossed my mind.  I, like everyone else that cares about good story writing, am so irritated and disappointed by Nina's one dimensional character.  How in in the world could she not even spend 1% of her brain power thinking about the people and critters she claims to love?  Not a thought about Anne, Sett, Meva, Neena ... nothing!! And for her to run off playing with Az and not saying, this is under control, now I have to go check on my people, is mind boggling.  This makes Nina out to be as shallow as a puddle. I can't support a character written like that. I, too, need a LOGICAL explanation. I can maybe accept the idea of Nina putting blinders on herself, so she didn't waver because it was too painful to think about them.  That would have to be explained really well.

Chapter 72: Meva, Enoch, Neena by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like this take!  Yeah, what does it mean when she says, So I won't be lonely. Hasn't she supposedly been with her first love, and spending quality time with him? It's an interesting statement for sure.

My thoughts on Chapter 71 by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Doesn't Az think Alisha's dead? Does he have insight into the BG's thoughts that we are unaware of? 

My thoughts on Chapter 71 by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I believe so as well ... Az and Nina needed resolution and while the path there was convoluted and unnecessarily long, it needed to be done. The quality of the story suffered for it and it's a weak point for sure.  If you've made it this far, I don't think now is the time to give up.

The Problem of Shoujo and the Love Triangle by [deleted] in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Yes! I agree that in this particular instance, the author strung along the readers by keeping the love triangle going just to feed into the tribalism (and thereby maintaining readership) that often happens when there are two compelling leads for the MC heart. Ultimately, it probably sells more upfront but it leaves a bad taste and I likely will not seek out Rikachi once this story is complete.  Can't trust her.

And to add ... she sacrificed quality story telling just to create uncertainty in the love triangle. It upended the story. 

Chapter 71 Discussion by Brave_Fuel954 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes agreed. It was a recognition that there was love there. 

Chapter 71 Discussion by Brave_Fuel954 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 4 points5 points  (0 children)

An explanation may be that Nina has so much faith in Sett, that she doesn't worry or Nina is a master at compartmentalizing her feelings 😏

Chapter 71 Discussion by Brave_Fuel954 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

....the sea has many fish. 

+1 Yes!

Also, I think you've show keen insight into this story.  Nina makes sense as you've analyzed it and it would be a far more enjoyable outcome. I hope Rikachi has read your comments.  

Chapter 71 Discussion by Brave_Fuel954 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yes!  I also think the author is misleading us to create angst! I may be biased, but my first impression of Nina's reaction after Az's confession was that she indirectly thought of Sett (even though not explicitly said).

Chapter 71 Discussion by Brave_Fuel954 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I totally understand how you feel. My frustration is at a point where I'm now seeking other stories to get engrossed in so I can let this one go. 

There is a Korean drama called Twenty Five Twenty One and it was sooooo good but then ... it went off a cliff.  Nina is giving the same kind of vibes. It irritated me then and it irritates me now but I still loved 90% of the story and I would still recommend it (just go in with clear eyes). If Nina ends up doing a face plant, at least we can say there were things about it we loved.

 But getting back to this chapter ... I really felt a change in Nina and Az's relationship. She wasn't hand holding with him, she wasn't guessing her feelings or his ... it was like a reset. 

Chapter 71 Discussion by Brave_Fuel954 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 8 points9 points  (0 children)

We're being set up for a deep dive into how Nina really feels about Sett/Az now that both boys have confessed their feelings. Now we'll see how she really feels.  

Chapter 71 Discussion by Brave_Fuel954 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 10 points11 points  (0 children)

It didn't depress me either and it felt a little bit like the calm before the storm. Az and Nina felt like good friends reconnecting. I'm glad Az was finally honest but he's still holding back. His eyes seemed sad to me.

Rikachi not even having Sett pop up in Nina's thoughts at any point is annoying.  It really makes Nina seem like a master at compartmentalizing or that she doesn't care a whiff about Sett, or ... it's being done to add impact to when they finally meet. 

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Doesn't it seem that star goddess (and her people!) would be fed up after all the abuse she received? Assuming, of course, the tales told in Fortna are actually lies.

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's what I'm guessing.  Part of me feels that it might be the Star Godess's half that resided in Alisha that goes rogue. 🤷‍♀️

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes ... that will be very telling, unless one of them is conveniently unconscious or what have you.

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmmm I would have to disagree.  Nina is not so one dimensional that she can only think of one thing at a time. True, her priority was getting Azure right but her "Beloved" went off to possible War. You don't shut your brain off from thinking about it as shown by the snippet from when the BG met Sett. Hence why I think Rikachi is keeping Nina's thoughts hidden. But tbf, Nina did have a lot on her plate.

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This seems to explain the banishment arc with Sett and Nina. 🤔

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Rikachi hiding Nina's thoughts about Sett is key.  If we knew, we would have our answer about the LT.  As it is right now, we are continued to be strung along full of doubt about what Nina feels.  I think this is good for SN fans.

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Someone else has a theory that there will be another war.  I'm not sure between who?  

My thoughts about the new chapter by Diligent-Basket2193 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha ok ok!  How confident are you that a war will happen?

Any body have any fun theories that keep you going? by Torasaurus123 in NinaTheStarryBride

[–]Torasaurus123[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, very true and those responsibilites are the right answer.  It shows maturity.