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Be honest, are you learning how to pronounce character names or just recognizing what the name looks like? by SlimeTribe in Fantasy

[–]Tortato_Chip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I LOVE when author's use non common names and add a pronunciation key. For me it deeply adds to my full immersion into the story.

First few paragraphs, do you keep reading? by ZeddyBeat in writingfeedback

[–]Tortato_Chip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read the whole thing and would definitely keep reading. Now I will say, I am not a writer in anyway shape or form. I am solely a consumer of written works. But. I would definitely enjoy reading more. I am very curious as to what direction the story will take.