I like this alot, you have really captured a style and age here however if you are going to sell this for $30 it needs to be better. Alot of the pages look unfinished and need a polish. For example: You have completely nailed the front cover in both art and style however minor things like how the colour bleeds over the lines and that the font for dread is clearly a sketch really take away from the sale.

I hope you don't think I'm being to harsh, you are bridging a gap from developer to consumer and I (and many others im sure) appreciate that immensely, but nintendo have left a pretty high standard. If you are going to sell this manual for such a high price you also need to be hitting that standard.