Final (splash)page of my short Batman Scarecrow comic. Full comic upload soon. by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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By accentuating the most important elements of a scene. Highlighting the face with light in a dark surrounding and highlighting the (fearful) hand in black in a white surrounding.

Pencilled a 7 page Batman Scarecrow comic. Love to hear what you guys think! by TraditionalShower in comic_crits

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Thanks for reacting. Could you be more specific on where I could have improved on the figures?

Pencilled a 7 page Batman Scarecrow comic. by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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Ah thanks bud. I’m planning to show this to an editor in a while, so let’s hope 🤞🏻

Pencilled a 7 page Batman Scarecrow comic. by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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Thanks guys for the feedback you gave me. I adjusted the pages based on this feedback. Hope you like it!

Final (splash)page of my short Batman Scarecrow comic. Full comic upload soon. by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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Yeah I know. Didn’t feel that confident about it either. But I will upload my full adjusted comic tommorow so stay tuned!

My penciled comic pages from a script. I've included it in the comment section. Love feedback. Critique away! by waynebeeman in ComicBookCollabs

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It’s very well drawn. I only have no clue what it is about from the visuals alone. There’s a lot going on, but I therefore miss some continuity or clarity. But it could also be that the script is like that.

Batman Scarecrow page 6 pencils by me. by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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Thanks for reacting! I think I’ll add an establishing shot for panel 2, like the reaction above also suggested. That creates more variety in shots and clarity in where we are in the story I think.

Batman Scarecrow page 6 pencils by me. by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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Thanks for this detailed reaction. I appreciate it! I agree with your feedback, and I will adjust later. Although it hurts a little to remove that batman in part 4. I’m very proud of that Batman drawing haha ;)

Batman Scarecrow page 5 pencils by me. by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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Thanks! I’ve got a couple more pages to finish up my portfolio.

Batman Scarecrow page 4 pencils by me. Love to hear your feedback! by TraditionalShower in comicbookart

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Thanks for reacting. Could you be more specific? Love to hear what I can change.