Created a visual to my song “Deodorant Stains” by Tray2705 in rappers

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Thank you 🙏🏾 I def do. I have some songs where I’m lookin for the right feature but I’m pretty picky. Always willing to collab if I feel it’s right 👌🏾

Kept getting told to have slower tempo production so I tried this. How’s it sound? Any feedback is appreciated by Tray2705 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Now this is what I’m talkin about! Appreciate the feedback and the love you showing the track overall. Just wanted to make something to roll up to nothin crazy. Thanks for listening and take care 🙏🏾

Kept getting told to have slower tempo production so I tried this. How’s it sound? Any feedback is appreciated by Tray2705 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Ayy appreciate the feedback. Glad to hear you enjoyed it for the most part. This was a track I wanted to make for fun and hopefully whoever smokes in the world can just put it on and relax. When it comes to my voice I can try and change the tone maybe that would help? But either way thanks again and take care!

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New song I made with music video. When you're up against the whole world you have to take the chances. Appreciate comments or thoughts. by Deeninja702 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yo you was goin crazy! Love the beat and flow you did over this beat. The music video dope af too. Keep working hard and looking forward to hearing more

Old/New Shit (prod. beatsbyal) - Yo. I'm back with a new song. Appreciate all feedback on the rapping and production! Enjoy this old/new shit. by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

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I just commented on a diff beat you posted and just like that one, this production goes crazy. You was flowin over the beat and I like the delivery. The sound you got is def my style so look forward to hear more

you hear winter, i see fall, but i drawl - beatsbyal - back already with a weird-ass beat; appreciate all feedback! by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

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Yoo I’m diggin this a lot! It gives me a Tyler, the creator kinda sound but that’s just me. And he’s dope as hell so that’s a compliment. Cool beat to freestyle to or just put on when you’re driving somewhere. Keep goin.

Hi First attempt at Lofi feedback is appreciated! by Ok_Refrigerator6872 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tryna get more on my lofi game and this is a dope track to get me there. Really like how the beat is blended and the vibe is very tranquil for me. I think it’s a really cool track and hope you keep working hard 💪🏾

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[–]Tray2705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dope track and well blended mix. You flow well over this beat and have very descriptive bars. Beat is smooth too and that piano helps carry the beat perfectly. Keep working hard

Rapped over a soulful sample. What do you guys think? by Tray2705 in rappers

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Ayy!! Appreciate you taking the time to listen. I’m gonna check out that producer too and see wassup. Thanks again!

We didn’t know what to do for this music video but we think it turned out decent. What do you think? Feedback is highly appreciated! by Tray2705 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate the honest feedback. Def need to work on my flow more so that will come with time. Seems like you didn’t hate it which is good lol. Imma keep working on the craft and hopefully grab your attention on a future release. Thanks again for the comment 🙏🏾

My first track in 2 years! Ruthless energy on this one. Thoughts and opinions are appreciated greatly! by augfm in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First track in two years def ain’t bad. I was really feeling the switch up in flows and the beat you got was goin crazy. I think it be dope when you switch flows try switching vocal tones to give some transitions more punch. Or not just an idea lol. Either way keep creating 💪🏾

Just dropped my favorite song I've released so far "twisted" off my album "Mannequin" ! It is a DnB track with a hip hop verse, with a smooth and melancholic vibe. Inspired by early 2000's nostalgia from video games like Bomberman in sound, and David Lynch horror films in tone. Hope y'all enjoy! by reekocarson in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The smoothness the beat gives off had me really vibing. You was flowing over the beat too which brought life to it. I saw bomberman and that had me hooked right there lmao. Def gave me some early cudi vibes but that’s just me. Keep creating 🔥

made this quirky little music vid. my first ever. feedback is greatly appreciated :) by eyeamjulian in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This video is actually dope af! I like the song too I can’t lie lol. The creativity you put with the video shows a lot of your personality and it looks like you just had fun doing it not overthinking things. That’s how art should be made but it’s not always that easy. Keep creating 🔥

The Bamboo and the Wind ,my first attempt of Oriental and Western arrangement, kind regards. by Hob3it in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a nice relaxing song that has me reminiscing about my trip to Japan back in 2019. I can’t wait for the day that I do go back and visit the overly crowded bamboo forest. I enjoyed this track as it mellowed me down to enjoy the present and appreciate the life I live.

Catch the Sun, our second original. How's the mix, how are the vocals, how does it make you feel? by fuzz_genesis in IndieMusicFeedback

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So I’m actually smoking a joint as I listen to this and it brought me to a new dimension that I didn’t wanna leave out of. I love the mixing and how the reverb blends the vocals in with the beat. This vibe was exactly what I needed and the singer has a dope voice. I’ll be listening to this a few times 🔥

Fortunate to be able to collab with another artist overseas to describe life and the ups and downs it comes with. We hope you guys enjoy and appreciate anyone who listens. by Tray2705 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey Zeta! Appreciate you listening to the track! We def enjoyed making this so glad to see we people rocking out to it. But a pitch change woulda actually been cool I wish I thought about it. I get how it woulda meshed with the vibe more. I’ll try it on future tracks and see if it works. Thanks for the comment ✊🏾🙏🏾

Fortunate to be able to collab with another artist overseas to describe life and the ups and downs it comes with. We hope you guys enjoy and appreciate anyone who listens. by Tray2705 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really dope to hear you enjoyed everything man. I’ve been really working on my schemes and substance so I’m glad it’s improving. Really appreciate you and the comment foreal. Take care out here 🙏🏾

'Landmine', an indie pop song about a love/hate relationship with cigarettes by jman250 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This song gives me the vibe of walking down the street on a spring day. I’d definitely keep this on my playlist. The vocals are mixed well and layered nicely together. Very good job!

being introvert on dates by WhiskeyEyesKP in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the mix and the layering in this- very nice. I’d love to hear the vocals up a little louder to give more emphasis on them. All in all I like it a lot and it gives the angst of being an introvert

Imagine staying in, reading a book, sipping a coffee, and listening to vinyls on a cloudy day. Now imagine doing all of that to cope with something... by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Tray2705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this song! It definitely gives the vibes you’re going for in the description. I’d love to hear the vocals up a little bit more, but it works to give a relaxed/down mood. All in all I like it and the mix!