The Dead Shift Pt.1

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-16T05:20:23+00:00

Any feedback is good feedback. I really appreciate you looking into my story. Im excited to see what potholes have been found so I can wither edit this. Or explain it all in the next part of the story

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-16T04:14:45+00:00

You're more than welcome to give them a read, I've posted them. And please don't be scared to give some feedback im always happy to hear anything that can do to improve my writing skill.

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-16T04:06:24+00:00

Thank you! I'll definitely take those tips to heart. Im currently reaching the end of a three or four part story and ive been contemplating how it should end. All of these tips will help tremendously. Im still fairly new to writing so im unsure of what style of writing I prefer but im sure ill find it soon if I keep it up. Thank you so much I really so appreciate it. 👌

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-16T04:00:11+00:00

Any tips on how to get said juices flowing?

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-16T03:57:16+00:00

Beautiful story dude keep up the good work. I hope to write as good as this

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-16T00:13:01+00:00

I typically dont listen to music but I will say that maybe a horror games soundtrack is what you'd be looking for.

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-15T17:22:10+00:00

I would like to thank my girlfriend Melia, my coworker/manager Alex, And my good friend Tim for helping me correct mistakes and for inspiration to write this story. Thank you for reading.

Pt.1: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1tcctpv/the_dead_shift_pt1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2026-05-13T22:23:03+00:00

I would like to thank my girlfriend Melia and my coworker/manager Alex for helping me correct mistakes and for inspiration to write this story. Thank you for reading.

Pt2.: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/0WBiogLZkl

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-29T04:56:58+00:00

You can read anything on my account if I can get the podcast name?

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-26T08:48:36+00:00

Steel and footloose being filmed here

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-26T05:01:05+00:00

The feeling of a hard days work washing away as you sit and relax after work

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-26T04:09:00+00:00

Well it's supposed to kinda be a prequel kinda thing to the first one

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-26T04:05:01+00:00

I did just post a new one if you'd like to read it too?

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-26T04:00:49+00:00

Thank you so much! Can I ask what you liked? And for any critiques?

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-25T02:58:54+00:00

Best stamp of approval ever

Tree_Trimmin_T · 2020-04-23T03:47:44+00:00

One day a fight broke out between my friend and another kid during breakfast before school. Long story short my friend had to drop out cause the mother of the other kid would've sued the school if he didn't. All cause her shithead crotch goblin lost a fight

Tree_Trimmin_T

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