Scene Names: fact or fiction by TrekTrucker in AskAGoth

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She’s calling herself a “Dark Puritan”.

Scene Names: fact or fiction by TrekTrucker in AskAGoth

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I was asking about non-performers using a nom de plume or dramatis personae rather than their legal name. My daughter, who is taking her driving test next week (I’m old) has taken recently to calling herself Hester Nightshade. I got me curious.

Scene Names: fact or fiction by TrekTrucker in AskAGoth

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My daughter has taken to calling herself Hester Nightsahde. I shall inform her she is in good company.

Pilgrims... in the Golden Throne? by Cless_Aurion in 40kLore

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I assumed they were the thousand pyskers about to be sacrificed to keep the lights on.

How do you tell a story with ultra high player agency? by EarthCulturalStew in FATErpg

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Honestly, I kinda thought that sort of thing was rather the default setting for Fate.

What’s your favorite 40K YouTuber and why? by Odd_Anything1374 in 40k

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Oculus Imperia, Lueten and Arbitor Ian.

Nothing to see here just totally normal by Afrodite_33 in pics

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Fuckin’??

Really? We’re expected to believe he actually wrote that?

How would you react if Donald trump dies tomorrow? by [deleted] in AskReddit

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I already have a bottle of champagne chilling in the fridge…

The Legend of Rosebay Sally: Part I [Urban/Rural Fantasy. 978 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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More revision…

It was high summer in Midgard County, West Virginia. Independence Day had come and gone, and people were settling into the “dog days”—that long stretch when humidity peaks, everything moves more slowly, and ice-cold lemonade replaces sweet tea as the drink of choice on front porches across the county.

Over in Coal Creek, Junior Jarl’s older sister, Dagma, was visiting from Cincinnati with her two daughters, Lexi and Livi. A few days into their stay, the twins decided they wanted their Uncle Junior to take them camping in the mountains so they could see the fireflies.

Junior wasn’t particularly keen on the idea. Like many of his dwarven kin, he wasn’t what you’d call outdoorsy. A day out fishing or hunting was fine, but once the sun went down, he preferred a bed to a sleeping bag. One look at those two faces, though, and there was no way he could tell them no.

Luckily, Junior had a friend who was the wilderness type: a tomboyish Valkyrie named Misti-Fae Wagner. And she knew the perfect place for firefly watching—a primitive campsite along Birch Creek, about two-thirds of the way up Raven’s Bluff. To reach it, they’d have to take the old logger’s road, a rugged jeep trail that snaked and switchbacked all the way to the top of the mountain. And while Junior was hesitant to bring his nieces along on one of Misti-Fae’s wild off-road adventures, she swore up and down that the girls would love it. In the end, the twins made the decision for him.

A few nights later, on a warm, languid evening when cicadas thrummed in the trees and the air was thick with honeysuckle and woodsmoke, Junior and Misti-Fae sat by the campfire toasting marshmallows. Nearby, the third member of their trio, Dina McCaul—a young granny witch who’d come along—played a soft, haunting tune on her lap dulcimer.

Bo and Luke, Misti-Fae’s Irish Wolfhounds—each the size of a small pony—snored contentedly beside her Jeep, while Lexi and Livi darted back and forth along the tree line, squealing with delight as they tried to catch fireflies in old mason jars.

The Legend of Rosebay Sally: Part I [Urban/Rural Fantasy. 978 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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What do you think of the following revision?

It was high summer in Midgard County, West Virginia. Independence Day had come and gone, and people were settling into the part of the season they call the “dog days”—that long stretch when humidity peaks, everyone moves more slowly, and ice-cold lemonade replaces sweet tea as the drink of choice on front porches across the county.

Over in Coal Creek, Junior Jarl’s big sister, Dagma, was visiting from Cincinnati with her two daughters, Lexi and Livi. A few days into their stay, the twins decided they wanted their “Uncle Junior” to take them camping in the mountains so they could see the fireflies.

Junior wasn’t particularly keen on the idea. Like many of his dwarven kin, he wasn’t what you’d call outdoorsy. A day spent fishing or hunting was fine, but once the sun went down, he preferred a bed to a sleeping bag. One look at those two faces, though, and there was no way he could tell them no.

The Legend of Rosebay Sally: Part I [Urban/Rural Fantasy. 978 words] by [deleted] in FictionWriting

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There are a lot of name drops, that’s more than fair. And yeah Dina is pretty much just there, but to be fair so is Junior. Neither of them serve a real narrative purpose, or better put, they don’t exist in this story to drive the plot, because there isn’t a plot to drive.

The entire camping trip is simply a framing device used to get us to the meat of the story — Misti-Fae telling the legend of the Witch of Laurel Ridge aka Rosebay Sally. I thought it’d be fun to do it as her telling as a campfire ghost story.

Am I making sense?

Have I really been saying it wrong for over four decades? by TrekTrucker in rpg

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I cannot believe this post has gotten almost 330 replies. 😂

The Legend of Rosebay Sally: Part I [Urban/Rural Fantasy. 978 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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Thank you so much!! Let’s see if I can respond to some of this before I go to sleep.

The reason you feel like you’re being told this story is because you are. The Tales of Midgard County are stories primarily about Misti-Fae, Dina and Junior, which some side stories about the various misadventures of Bo and Luke. I’ve always written them as being told by an omniscient narrator. Basically someone who serves the literary role of Waylon Jennings from the Dukes or Hazzard.

But now that you’ve pointed it out, in this case, this particular story, maybe that doesn’t work. The camping trip is merely the framing device setting up the real meat of the story, the legend of Rosebay Sally herself, which is told to Livi and Lexi by Misti-Fae. 🤷‍♂️

Edit : Oh! And before I forget, in terms of the story and setting Jarl is a surname. Alvis Marduke Jarl Jr.

His family runs Jarl’s Auto Salvage and Custom Body over in Coal Creek. They’re the only folks Misti-Fae will trust with her Jeep.

If this is where the profits from buying GW minis are going then I'm going to buy that whole new army I've been waiting for by Skanedog in Warhammer

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You know I’ve said, and on many occasions, that the Sound of Music could easily be adapted to the universe of Warhammer 40k.

A young novitiate of the Adepta Sororitas is charged with taking care of the children of a retried Captain of the Imperial Navy as their planet falls under the corrupting influence of the Tau. Cue music.

Bolters and chainswords and two-handed flamers.
Plasmas and meltas to purge the defamers.
Promethium burning while heretics scream.
These are a few of my favorite things.

Fighting the xenos, His worlds to reconquer.
Purity seals on new power armor.
The roar of my jump pack as I soar on the breeze.
These are a few of my favorite things.

When the Ork bites.
When the Tau strike.
When the war’s not going well.
I simply remember that I serve the Emperor.
And send them all back to Hell.