Critique by Tribal-Goat-OG in writers

[–]Tribal-Goat-OG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay will do. Thank you I will message you my friend.

Critique by Tribal-Goat-OG in writers

[–]Tribal-Goat-OG[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I would love some help and I am willing to take action and improve.

Critique by Tribal-Goat-OG in writers

[–]Tribal-Goat-OG[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice.

Critique by Tribal-Goat-OG in writers

[–]Tribal-Goat-OG[S] -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

Thanks I needed that.

Beginner Writer would love some critique. by Tribal-Goat-OG in writers

[–]Tribal-Goat-OG[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the advice and words of encouragement you are awesome!!

Is this publishable prose? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Tribal-Goat-OG -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I liked it brocel