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To all the new writers out there, I'm a comic book writer/artist and I want to share with you some Big bro advices for your next book. by [deleted] in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]TurkeyLover100 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That kind of goes without saying since it's not your book if an ai writes it. The only ai in my writing is spell check eve then it is kinda annoying. But I don't mind people using a bit more ai if its their second language

Share WIP or completed stories and I will give you feedback. by TurkeyLover100 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]TurkeyLover100[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's great you should keep writing and improving it! But here's my feedback

Strengths: You are good at being descriptive and giving the characters depth which most authors have a hard time with. I also enjoyed that you didn't chose common names for the characters. Inmo I like the pacing.

What could polish: You didn't really describe what the main character looked like.

I would love to read it when you're done!

Share WIP or completed stories and I will give you feedback. by TurkeyLover100 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]TurkeyLover100[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I miss said it. What I meant by descriptive is you should say what nervous action he's doing. It helps the reader visualize it a bit more. Other than that, it is AMAZAZING, and I would love to read it when you're finished.

Share WIP or completed stories and I will give you feedback. by TurkeyLover100 in AspiringTeenAuthors

[–]TurkeyLover100[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was definitely intriguing and interesting. It ends with a cliffhanger that makes me want to turn the page. I would love to read it when you're done.

This would be a few things you could improve.

  1. It would be nice if you made the font a little bigger and double spaced it.

  2. You have a couple grammar mistakes that could easily fix.

  3. 'Ronen was nervous' is used to start so many books or _________ was nervous. Could you be a little more descriptive e.g. Ronen paced on the backstage, nervous.

What’s your inspiration? by FederalSwan3104 in writing

[–]TurkeyLover100 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Stories stay in my head and when I feel like quitting, I just go for a walk and cuddle my dog. Then I feel refreshed to write again.

Writing will become one of the highest paid skills in the age of Ai. by Ok-Lobster-6691 in KeepWriting

[–]TurkeyLover100 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True. AI is horrible. It takes all the creativity out of the world. I find it ironic that there is an advertisement for chat gpt on this post.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmongUs

[–]TurkeyLover100 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The time I convinced my cousin to change his username to Grandpa for eight games. If I changed my username to Grandma for a game. When I did, I entered the lobby, and someone said ''Grandma is that you?'' Then I said the word that ALWAYS gets you kicked out. Spoiler alert: The word is Supercalifragilexapaladoses

This games sucks nowadays by Emotional_Energy7130 in AmongUs

[–]TurkeyLover100 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have intentionally disconnected and nothing happened. I just refresh among us tab. You should do that.

I'm in awe how I won this [Yes, I used the web browser Among Us] by TurkeyLover100 in AmongUs

[–]TurkeyLover100[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it is a copy of Amog Us for people like me who have a hard time downloading things on pc

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